Writing Tutorials: Personal Narratives and Essays, How to Write a Story

What is a personal narrative?

A personal narrative typically elaborates on an experience that changed you.

What is the purpose of a personal narrative? You are sharing your experiences with interested readers. A reader might learn from your experience or empathize due to similar circumstances.

A personal narrative tells a story from your point of view. Perhaps it was a memorable experience, a challenge defeated or an impressive accomplishment. A personal narrative should illustrate the journey as well as the physical and/or emotional change it created.

All writers have a particular writing style. I for one am a freestyle writer. I choose a topic and let my fingers flow. After I am done it is time to tailor with editing and revising techniques. I literally brow beat myself with constant tweaking. It's madness! Traditionally, my freestyle model would obviously be considered incorrect and is not a textbook model. There is actually a structure and model that is to be followed for any skill. However, free writing is the best way to get started when developing a personal narrative.

Let's look at the model for writing a personal narrative and apply whatever suits your personal writing style. Remember, in the end you are the one writing, editing and publishing. As you develop your portfolio you will find what works for you. The main thing is to not get your genres crossed and leave your readers confused or doubtful of your skills.

Creative Writing Prompts for Kids and Teenagers: Resources for Elementary, Middle and High School Teachers

This hub provides a variety of writing prompts for kids, teens and adults. Prompts can inspire creative writing, a personal narrative or even a poem.

Prewriting: Writing Prompts for Personal Narratives

First you have to CHOOSE a topic. What event in your life is worth retelling? You need to have enough information to be able to create a well-balanced narrative. If you are stuck on developing a topic you'll need to apply a few brainstorming techniques. Things to ponder...

What has been my greatest accomplishment?

What has been the most destructive error I made?

What is an event in my life that my acquaintances would be surprised to know?

When did I feel truly betrayed?

What event in my childhood has created the greatest impact in my adult life?

When choosing a topic think of the standard PLOT model. And choose a topic that can provide value to each stage of Plot -

  • Introduction
  • Rising action
  • Climax
  • Falling action
  • Resolution

If you look at your personal narrative as a short story with a plot it will help you choose a topic with depth and a natural storyline. Your storyline. Think of the elders in your family that are great storytellers. They are great at sharing descriptive events in their respective lives. They carry you through the story with imagery and sensory details. You'll want to be THAT person, but in print.

Free-writing your personal narrative

Yes, you read right - FREE-WRITING. This is YOUR story and you already know the events. Take about five minutes and write non-stop about your event. Tell your story through your words without thinking of conventions. The goal here is to develop your chronological order, jiggle your memory and to prompt your story-line.

After you finish your free-writing draft you'll want to number your key events. Just start at the beginning and place a 1 at the first event and work your way down. After you are done numbering you will want to do a second read through and underline the main idea of each event.

Including Tone and Voice in your pre-writing

Number a paper in list form from one to your last numbered event.

Tone & Mood - Read the numbered events from your free-writing draft. On your blank list write one or two words that describe your mood or attitude during that particular event. Example; I was sad or confused. I was angry or bewildered. Work your way down the list.

Sensory Details - Think of your five senses - sight, smell, taste, touch, and hearing. Work your way down your list and try to add a sensory detail for each event. For example; The house smelled of cinnamon as Grandmother prepared an apple pie for the reunion. These events and sensory details may seem unnecessary to some, but sensory details will provide depth and imagery for your readers.

Descriptive and Figurative Language - Be creative! Descriptive and figurative language will add depth and imagery.

Need resources on how to be descriptive? If you have not read the previous tutorials you might want to look at Describing a Character or Describing Setting. I offer a guide of what to consider when developing descriptive language. I also include a variety of examples. Again, just because your narrative is non-fiction it doesn't mean it can't include imagery through descriptive language.

Take a look at your free writing and at your list and begin writing and organizing your personal narrative. Keep chronological order in mind and be vigilant of providing an evocative personal narrative for your reader. Apply your tone and mood words where relevant and lace in a few sensory details. I like to tell my students. Not only do I want to read your narrative I want to see it.

Editing and Revising your personal narrative

The standard model for evaluating your narratives should include the following five traits

  • Focus and Coherence
  • Organization
  • Development and Progression of Ideas
  • Tone & Voice
  • Conventions

Writing Analysis

Analysis of your writing

As I have said before, if you are writing a personal narrative you need to help your reader connect with your life and experiences through your descriptive writing style.

Let's use the five-trait model as I guide you through things to consider,

Focus and Coherence - Is the main idea clear and supported with text and supporting details? Did you apply effective use of sensory details, characterization and setting?

Organization - Is the order of your text logical? Can the reader follow your flashbacks, foreshadowing and events?

Progression of Ideas - Are your literary devices helpful or hindering? Does the reader understand the changes you experienced?

Voice & Tone - Is your tone appropriate? Does the reader understand your perspective?

Conventions - Do you have any grammatical errors, formatting issues or spelling mistakes? Are pronouns used excessively? Are verbs used in the appropriate tense?

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rabecker 5 years ago

Great information. Thank you.


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habee 5 years ago from Georgia

Wonderful hub about personal narratives! And thanks a bunch for the mention! Voted up and +1'd.


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missolive 5 years ago from Texas Author

Hi habee! I'm glad (and honored) to see you stopped by. How could I not mention your awesome hubs? :)

Thanks for the vote up and +1!!! Greatly appreciated!


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Techbook 5 years ago from India

Patience is a virtue and Olive I must admit you got a lot of it. Your hub is not an easy one to begin and finish, you make me guess each time you post a new hub as to how you bring out such amazing high quality hubs.


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missolive 5 years ago from Texas Author

Thank you Techbook - I tease my students and tell them, "if you ever see a jar of Time & Patience at the store please buy me some" - yes, I'm actually pretty patient. Hard on myself though. I'm glad to see you are reading the series. I hope you find them beneficial - glad to have a techie follower on the hub ;)


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Melovy 5 years ago from UK

I totally am with you with regards to free writing. I’ve taught creative writing to both adults and children and this worked for everyone I taught, and it works for me. I first read about it in a book written in the 1930’s by Dorothea Brand. I think it was called “Becoming a Writer.” Free writing lets the unconscious mind, or right brain, to get the creative juices going. Then you use the conscious mind to tidy everything up in revision.

I also think your suggestion about using all 5 senses in writing is something that is often overlooked, but that makes a huge difference to the engagement of the reader. If your writing can evoke a smell, that really gets your reader involved.

Very useful hub.


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missolive 5 years ago from Texas Author

Melovy - what a wonderful comment. I'm glad you mentioned Brand's book. I have found some very interesting and useful vintage books over the years. I also enjoyed your comment on the right and left brain - it makes perfect sense.

You reminded me of an upcoming assignment. My students are prompted to write about their Thanksgiving meals. When it comes time to edit and revise I ask them, "Can you smell and taste the food in your writing?" I LOVE sensory details! :)


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fpherj48 5 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

Hello missolive and Thank you for this wonderfully written informational hub. You have educated me and I am a lover of knowledge....ALL knowledge. The more I can learn each day I breathe, the happier and more fulfilled I become. Hubpages has been very good for me in terms of being able to visit the many authors in our community, read their great hubs, comment and communicate. It's almost like traveling the world! Today I am glad I found your hub, gotten to know a bit about you and let me say Thank you for introducing me to Habee....TWO new talents for me to follow. Peace!!


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missolive 5 years ago from Texas Author

fpherj48 - your comment could not warm my heart more. I send you a heartfelt thank you. It brings me great pleasure to know that I have provided knowledge or assistance. Habee is wonderful - you are going to enjoy following her. She is an awe inspiring resource and role model.

Peace to you, MissOlive


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homesteadbound 5 years ago from Texas

Wow, what a great hub! This is really great. I am learning so much from this series. I am bookmarking them all and will be doing many fo the exercises going through my little MissOlive mini-writing course. I'm really looking forward to that. Thanks for taking the time to share this information.


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Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

Hi, this is really helpful, I am free style, I don't keep to any rules, but as you say when you are writing a long piece for instance then you have to stick to a certain layout and the rules so that the reader can keep up with you, love the advice, love the layout, (blue dividers) and rating it up! and bookmarking! lol


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missolive 5 years ago from Texas Author

homesteadbound - Thank you! Glad to see you have bookmarked this one. Glad to share too :) You've got some great hubs out there yourself - honored. I clicked the "hubs" link and you were right there on top with one of your hubs (hubba bubba). congrats!

Nell Rose - You Rock! Whatever you are doing it is working! Every time I check out out the "Hubbers" link you are almost always on the first or second page. That's AWESOME! Free writing is for me, but sometimes we need to reel it in for some structure. I'm not much for rules either, but it is nice to understand and tweak the traditional fundamentals of writing. Glad to see you stopped by.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

These are great. Have you seen my hubs on writing poetry?


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missolive 5 years ago from Texas Author

PDXKaraokeGuy - Thank you so much for stopping by. I look forward to reading your poetry hubs.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

I look forward to your comments, and to reading more of your hubs!


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missolive 5 years ago from Texas Author

Thanks for the reminder PDX - I just left you two comments - will check back with you later


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

I appreciated your comments. Keep up the good work!


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Bbudoyono 4 years ago

Excellent hub. Thanks a lot for writing it.


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missolive 4 years ago from Texas Author

PDXKaraokeGuy - Thank you!

Bbudoyono - You are quite welcome - glad to share


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jeyaramd 4 years ago from Mississauga, Ontario

Thanks for sharing your wealth of information. You really are generous. I haven't written a personal narrative in a long time. Perhaps, I shall try one for the new year. I will keep remember your hub. Thanks so much. Voted up.


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Ehtesham12 4 years ago from Islambad

Useful hub.Thanks for sharing.I learn from very much from your hubs. :)


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Sinea Pies 4 years ago from Northeastern United States

Very nice hub as usual, missolive. And, yes, I am one of Habee's zillion followers. She is such a great example.

Voted up and useful and I'm Stumbling this one, too.


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savingkathy 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Great hub! I look forward to reading some of your other writing tutorials. Voted up and useful!


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Just Ask Susan 4 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Your hub is packed full of very useful and helpful information. I've bookmarked this so that I can come back again and re-read it in the near future. Thanks so much.


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missolive 4 years ago from Texas Author

Just Ask Susan - Thank you Susan. I greatly appreciate the comment and the bookmark. Glad to know you'll be back :)

savingkathy - The related writing hubs include describing setting and describing a character. I hope you enjoy them Thank you for reading and the votes.

Sinea Pies - Isn't habee awesome? Thanks for the 'stumble' and votes. Nice seeing you Sinea

Ehtesham12 - glad to hear it - thank you

jeyaramd - always a thrill to spot you on my hubs. I greatly appreciate your support. I'm sure you will write many wonderful narratives


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RealHousewife 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

Awesome! Another great free leaning hub! Lol. You are an amazing!


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910chris 4 years ago from North Carolina

How are you able to make those new paragraph boxes? I can't find those options.


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missolive 4 years ago from Texas Author

Realhousewife - Thank you Kelly!! You are one of my favorite 'students' !!! :) I love learning from you too!!!

910chris - Hi, I use a photo capsule for those. I have a hub called 'How to Create Personalized Headers' I have a link to it just above my last picture. They are really easy to make. :)


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mary615 4 years ago from Florida

Miss Olive, thanks for much for all this info. This is another one I've bookmarked "Miss Olive"!


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B. Leekley 4 years ago from Kalamazoo, Michigan, USA

This hub is very helpful. Thanks.


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missolive 4 years ago from Texas Author

mary615 - Thank you Mary! I appreciate all of your bookmarks and support. I hope you'll be able to use a bookmark feature on your computer's toolbar since HP no long has the bookmark option. Thanks for stopping by. :)

B. Leekley - Thank you very much Mr. Leekley. It is always a pleasure to spot you on one of my hubs. Have a wonderful day. :)


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FaithDream 4 years ago from (Midwest) USA

Great information missolive. As usual, I'm quite impressed. You successfully grabbed my attention with all the tidbits and tools for us writers.

Thank you for sharing these ideas.


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missolive 4 years ago from Texas Author

FaithDream, Thank you so much for your lovely compliment - I'm touched and honored.


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Levertis Steele 4 years ago from Southern Clime

What a great resource for writers! Thanks for sharing.


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missolive 4 years ago from Texas Author

Leveris Steele, thank you so much! Glad to share.


Kimberly Kardashian 4 years ago

This was not useful for my 2 little sisters kendal and kylie);


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Jlbowden 2 years ago from Long Island, New York

Another excellently LAID out tutorial Miss Olive among the many articles of yours, that I have already found very beneficial . Thank you again for the many awesome and useful tips that you have also included in this tutorial.

Put together in such an organized and easy to follow format for those newbies looking to hone the perfect short story or memoir. Couldn't help not to vote this one 2 thumbs up! (;

JLBowden


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Jlbowden 2 years ago from Long Island, New York

Another gem of an article among the so many other tutorial related articles, that you have already shared with your readers here Miss Olive. Couldn't help but to find this one just as useful and awesome to add!

Jlbowden

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