YOU NEVER QUIT


Some moments, may pass by,

Leaving some tears, making us dry,

As they do often every where,

As they remain here not for ever


The up hills follow the down stream too,

The path may turn, not a vision into,

A pocket could empty, leaving no coins,

A debt could go high, with no care joins,


The time lag behind, may harass you a bit,

You must rest and wait, but never you quit.


The head and tails toss on every coin,

The up and downs in life are both twin,

As all learning, the same lesson,

As all live, when life do worsen.


It’s only a path, when one fails,

Destiny do demands, some failure tales,

You may be slow, then avoid the pace,

Another chance will blow you with grace.


The caring hand’s slap may break you on hit,

You must face and fight, but never you quit.


Success is the reach, though failure path,

You never know, how close you are,

The clouds of doubt need many rains

The mind must kept ready with drains


You may be far, in your thoughts,

You may be trapped in some droughts,

Yet you must know never can come,

The night which longs and day don’t sun.


No one could wipe out, the entire tears kit,

The storage empties slowly, but never you quit.

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Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

Encouraging and beautiful!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thank you very much !!


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abradford55 5 years ago from Howell,MI

That was very inspiring and shows that hope is always around the corner waiting for you.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Yes abradford you are right, i made it when i was in such dilemma and i got out with this poem with me...thanks again for your comments


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carcro 5 years ago from Winnipeg

Nicely done! You are so right, we are bound to meet with some failures along the way, but its those who persevere that also succeed in attaining their goals. Voted Up and Awesome...


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks carcro....


Sueswan 5 years ago

Hi Moneycop

Great poem. Great advice.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

hi sueswan...

thanks a lot

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breakfastpop 5 years ago

Wonderful. Every successful person has met with failure and carried on to success.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

yes breakfastpop....every one of us is full of inner driven energy to which we must knew. i remember my one instance where i decided to suicide, in my school days when i got failed. and with the fear of scolding and punishment from father i decided to die. I was just standing near by railway track where a student had done suicide an hour ago and his parents were crying like any thing at the spot....i was really stunned and realized the love my parents also do to me. The punishment is for my benefit, i must understand this. I was being blessed to have such a live example to learn a lesson of life. But it does not happen with all and so i decided to narrate this hub...thanks for ur precious comment.


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Nefarious_Misery 5 years ago from on the move

Well written powerful piece. Life will always knock you down, but you have to choose to get back up time and time again.

Voted up and beautiful.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks nefarious.....


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Happyboomernurse 5 years ago from South Carolina

Lovely, thought-provoking poem about the inevitable ups and downs, successess and failures that we all face. I agree we can learn from every situation we find ourselves in, regardless of whether we perceive the present as good or bad, high or low. Voted up, useful, awesome, beautiful and interesting.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

happyboomernurse...thanks for this visit and comment..yes you are right every thing in this huge world is the pakage of knowledge and lessons to we all, the only thing is to have an eye and get it to learn.

And when one is not capable these poems could help, so i had written this to motivate people who can think but cant feel...and also a revision for those who made it aside of there busy schedule.

thanks for voting and showing interests...just go through my other hubs...those are not just article to add upon. They are really gems to have pinned on cuff lings and can be ornamental to jwellers too.

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