YOU JUST LEFT

 

You just left~

With hugs and handshakes~

Gone as it snowed~

To be here no more.

 

You just left~

With my heart amending~

In the daylight your on the road~

Pure love I am sending.

 

You just left~

A solitaire shoestring on the driveway~

Amongst the slush I stand alone~

I know you had to get away~

Yet my spirit still moans.

 

You just left~

Giving away your guitar~

Why did you do that? ~

I still can not believe you’re going so far?

 

You just left~

Leaving clothes and other stuff~

I wonder if you’ll miss it~

I know I fuss too much.

 

You just left~

Now we will all have to adjust~

This is very emotionally ruff~

You didn’t even take your quilted puff.

 

You just left~

And we already miss you~

Did you say goodbye to Kitty? ~

Now I dab my eye with an already soaked tissue.

 

You just left~

And I wonder what more I could do~

You just left now our family is few~

You just left~

For sure my feelings are numb and blue.

You just left~

What now can I do?

 

By

Lisa J. Warner

AKA

Lisa Luv

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DeBorrah K. Ogans 5 years ago

Lisa Luv, Nice! What well expressed emotions when one feels abandon or is grieving… Thank you for sharing, Peace & Blessings!


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Lisa Luv 5 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

DeBorrah K. Ogans Thank You....My son just left today...I guess I am feeling the empty nest thing again...


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Kim Lynn 5 years ago

I understand how that feels and you expressed it perfectly. Beautiful poem!

Many Blessings,

Kim


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Lisa Luv 5 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

Thank You Kim Lynn...Blessings


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jesusmyjoy 5 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

wonderful sis


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Lisa Luv 5 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

Thank You Dear Sister


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pol1ce 5 years ago from the Right Place

Beautiful, "do you real feel it?!"

I vote Up

and

I vote Beatiful

I'm sharing alot today, maybe tomorrow will rain on me, who knows


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Lisa Luv 5 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

I don't think it will rain on you pol1ce...Thank You for the read...I am glad you liked it...Blessings


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

Hi Lisa, I really like this. Great poem.

Michael.


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Lisa Luv 5 years ago from Conneticut, USA Author

Thank You Michael~~~~~BLESSINGS................

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