You "Fehl" From The Heavens - Love Poem By Cathy Nerujen

"Two Girls" painting by Mueller
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How Fell became "Fehl"

I wrote this love poem for a very special lady who writes in Hub Pages. Though she writes as blaise25, her name is Fehl Dungo. Many of my recent poems are about her, some openly, others covertly. And yes, that is her name in the title. All my poems are about love. I have known Fehl for just over four years, yet I feel I have known her forever. Our lives seem to have become so wrapped up in each others life. Allegorically, she feels as though she came from the heavens.

You Fehl From the Heavens

Imagine a love for a
woman so pure –
like a sexy Girl Friday
with a sexy allure
she teases and kisses –
her love is so true -
and oh how I love her
that lover is you.

You - Fehl From The Heavens
you flew like a flame –
we swam in the stars –
and our hearts are to blame -
the heat of your love
is a furnace inside me –
your lava lamp love –
it entombs and excites me.

Your juicy sweet lips –
and your warm friendly eyes –
propel me, abseil me –
send me to the skies –
your body so buff
and your hair – how it shines –
I want to blow kisses
right into your mind.

I’m crazy about you –
and baby, you know it –
your words – yes - they flow from
the Heart of a poet –
your whisper-light kisses –
they whisper my name –
we know in our hearts
that our souls are the same.

Copyright (c) 2013. Fehl Dungo
Copyright (c) 2013. Fehl Dungo | Source

You - Fehl From The Heavens
you flew like a dove –
I fell from the stars –
and then We Fell in Love.
you kiss with your eyes -
and you write from your soul –
so let’s make a pact –
and together - grow old.

Fehl, the things you told me recently, I will never forget... You are such a beautiful woman and you make me so happy. So I am admitting the world’s worst kept secret and saying this plainly. I love you so much, and I float when I am with you. This poem is more than just dedicated to you. It has your name in the title... and the chances of having a name like yours is as rare as you ...

A special thank you to Cassy for the constant love and support. Please leave a comment for me below. Thank you.

Copyright (c) 2011 to 2014 Cathy Nerujen. All rights reserved. This romantic poem is part of a collection of my forthcoming book of love poetry, coming in 2014.

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A.A. Zavala profile image

A.A. Zavala 5 years ago from Texas

I've said it once, and I will say it always. Women make the best muses. Beautiful, sensual poem to the one you love.


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

This poetry is simply breath taking, divine, heart loving and of course full of love for your partner you share your life with. I am so happy for the both of you, both excellent writers and poets. I am proud to call you friends here at the hubs.

To find a love such as you've both found is a tribute to LOVE and I am thrilled that you shared this gift you have of verse with us here. Bravo, take a bow and blessing and praise to both of you.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Augustine, thank you for being the first one to comment. Oh wow. We are? If women are, then we need to talk about William (Shakespeare). Heh. My muse she loves writing beautiful hubs about me too. :) Thank you for the nice comments.

PS, I am almost finished my Narcissus hub and I am trying to inject some extra humor into it, and kinky-ness... trying to match your hubs. LOL.

Hi Saddlerider, wow thank you for the lovely words here. Fehl would blush too. LOL. Fehl is an amazing writer, and she writes from the heart. Aw, that is so nice of you to say this. Mwah. Well we are proud to have you as our friend here too. :)

I have to give Fehl for credit for so much. She is very sweet and loving. And Cassy too for being so wonderful and decent. I love Hub Pages. :)


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epigramman 5 years ago

....only you could fall from the heavens and into my poetic lap of luxury - luxury you say???? well I've had the luxury in knowing someone like you and being blessed by your lovely poetic mind and the way you make my heart and mind come together and appreciate the good things in life like your writing --- happy thanksgiving - well that's everyday and all over the world - because we are all one on this planet - sending warm wishes to you and that most adorable CHEEKY GIRL and good energy too from lake erie time ontario canada 3:34pm


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Colin. :) Thank you for the nice comments today. You are a prince as always, with your lovely comments. Heh. It is nice to have good things in one's life and I treasure them. especially Fehl, and Cassy. I love your sentiment, yes everyone is "One".

Okay I am not going to sing now. LOL. The smell of our Huge Pizza in the oven is driving my nose mad. I hope you are having a sweet day, Colin. I love your latest poems and hubs. You always make me smile and get me thinking.

Thanksgiving is everywhere today. It's usually a North American thing but it's getting popular here now.

Lake Pizza time... any minute now. :)


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

A truly heaven sent tribute from one poetic angel to another...wonderful sentiment Astra.;)


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gail641 5 years ago from Mason City

Beautiful poem about love that is wonderful!


JinnyMarte 5 years ago

You have a great talent with words...you speak with beauty and with an open heart. Love is universal...


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

This is a bombshell. I love you, baby. Mwaaahh! This is so beautiful. It is so you and me. From the title to the last word, I hope my kisses would describe exactly what I feel and how I feel about this and about you…

I love the photos too. I am smiling like crazy :) The second one, hmm would that be the album cover of our Boracay moments? :) XOXOXO


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gail641 5 years ago from Mason City

I believe that love is universal, too.


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rjsadowski 5 years ago

Well written.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Bryan / Mentalist acer; hehehe... I am smiling reading this. Oh I am guilty as charged. She deserves a nice angelic tribute. Fehl deserves so much for being so amazing. Thank you Bryan. :)

Hi gail641: love is amazing, and yes, beautiful love is something I treasure. Thank you for the comments. :)

Hi JinnyMarte: thank you for this, Jinny. Um... I try to speak with total honesty, and yes I see beauty in it. But really, it's Fehl that gives it beauty. Heh. And yes, the open heart comes from being open to so many things. Love is so amazing. It is universal. :)

Hey Fehl / blaise25: can I just hug you to bits? Hehehe. Sorry about the bombshell, baby. LOL. Yes, it is us, and you make it beautiful. Because you are beautiful. Mwaaaaah. Your kisses are Beautifehl. LOL.

Yes, the photo of you was done with help from Cassy and some Photoshop. Oh I need to learn more about it, it is amazing. I love that picture of you. Your kisses....um... can I answer that in private? LOL. I am blushing now. :)

I am so happy you like it, Fehl. Smile more. I am smiling too. The 2nd photo...um... yes, if you want it to, Fehl. We will be there, and we can have moments like that, but make them our own. :) I love you, honey. Mwaaaaaaaah. You mean the world to me. XOXOXOXOX

gail: love is universal as we all feel it with the one we love. Thank you for believing. :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

rjsadowski: thank you for the comment.


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tnvrstar 5 years ago from doha, qatar

Beautiful romantic love poem! Voted Up


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

tnvrstar: thank you for the nice comment, and the vote. :)


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gail641 5 years ago from Mason City

I voted up, too.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Gail, you get a gold star for that. I appreciate your kindness. Have a sweet day. :)


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Love is a precious gift and when we find it, we are so blessed. You have found that special love that only a few can comprehend of. Thank you for sharing.. Cheers


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

Kisses and hugs you to bits too. Mmmmhhhh….I love you, beautiful.

I love all the comments here. :) Yeah I must learn Photoshop, too. Curly must teach me. LOL She’s amazing! I love the pictures.

Oh, you blushing…I love it when you blush like that. Mwah! You mean the world to me, too. XOXO and more in private.. ^,^


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

In a world filled with trouble, violence and distruption of so many kinds, it really is a joy to read a poem so jammed packed with love..

From beginning to end you carried me along , floating on beautiful verse.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Oh where have I been to have missed this beautiful poem. this is so romantic and sensual, you are clearly so in love and care completely for each other. I can certainly relate to your words, awesome as always.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

A wonderful hub,so full of love, magnetism and words spoken clearly and freely.

Hers to mnay more toshare with you on here.

Take care and I wish you a wonderful day.

Eddy.


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi always exploring: I agree with you. Love does bless us in some magical way. Oh I think more can comprehend it and I give people credit for their understanding. And I am so happy to share my poetry. Thank you for the kind comments. :)

Hi Fehl: Mmhh, I love your hugs and kisses. Heh. :) The comments are great. My love poem about you is getting lots of attention, honey. Oh Photoshop is fun. Cassy loaned me a book on it. I love the pictures too. She showed me the twitter thing she did. She did my twitter page too. LOL.

You love my blushes... hehehe... I want to hug you so much, Fehl. :) Okay... in private, baby. ^,^

Hi Dim: um... I prefer love poems and nice wholesome things too. I know what you mean, though. I will let other poets cover the more action movie kind of poems. Yup, my poems are pretty obvious, aren't they? LOL. Well thank you for the wonderful comments. I am glad you liked this. Have a sweet day, Dim. :)

Hi acaetnna: oh this was only just published the other day, so no worries. I do like romantic sensual poems, and I am getting less shy now when writing them. LOL. Oh wow, well the person who is the inspiration for this poem ... she fell from the heavens, right into my lap. Hehehe. (Read my previous poems to see how...)

I am happy you can relate. You are always a great commenter and a true fan. I love your poems as they are always about romance too. Take care, my friend. :)

Hi Eddy, well my words are freed by my feelings... and when the feelings are true, the words mean more... I think I will always be a love poet, and writing about romance. Thank you for the good wishes and you take care too. I appreciate the kind comments, Eddy. :)

Thank you everyone for the lovely comments. :)


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The original Eman 5 years ago from london

There Is so much love in this poem and I think Its refreshing to see that. It wasn't over the top It was honest and came from the heart .Thank you for uploading this onto hub pages.


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Sharyn's Slant 5 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

I'm not sure if I have ever commented on your hubs but I have read them with much intrigue. I must tell you, your words are beautiful. Straight from the heart. Oh, and I love the title. You and Fehl make a beautiful couple. I love your openness. There is nothing like the bond of two woman in love.

Sharyn


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi original Eman; yes there is that...and yes it comes from the heart...or else it doesn't make sense. It is about Fehl, it is really her. She is a very special person. It has been about Fehl for quite some time. I am a lucky woman. Thank you for the comments.

Hi Sharyn; I think I have read some of your hubs. My hubs are easy to read, there's little to hide. Yes, the title is everything... a beautiful couple. Oh wow, I am smiling reading this now. :)

Um... the bond is .... very beautiful ... and more still... but words can't always say how it feels... it's more than words. Love is so many amazing things.

But I love poetry as it captures a lot of it... it is a bond, yes. Thank you Sharyn for these comments.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

Astra what a beautiful poem. I love it. :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi carolinemd21, um can I call you Caroline? I'm glad you loved my poem.

Have a sweet day. :)


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Leptirela 4 years ago from I don't know half the time

Helloooooooo Astra Nomic ((----- slightly OTT!

But its been so loong since Ive been here on your hubs

and truth be told I'm almost afraid of how BLESSED YOU ARE with your words :) AND Fehl of course

I can see you have been a great inspiration for each other

and I am envIous as well as admiring you both at the same time ...

I hope this lasts forever for you both

Love always :)

VOTE UP (NO DOUBT)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Leptirela, thank you so much for the comment... you can just call me Cathy... is okay. :) Oh well you checked my new poem, so that is okay. I'm glad you like my beautiful poem for Fehl. She is amazing. Yes, we inspire each other...envious? Aw, please don't say that... we are only human after all... but thank you for the nice sentiment in that... that is so nice of you to say. (Hugs) Thank you for the vote up too. Have a sweet day, my friend. :)


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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

This is such a beautiful and heart warming tribute of your loving relationship. The emotions just drips from your words.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you Minnetonka Twin, yes it is a tribute. Fehl is a wonderful person. She inspires me in so many ways... :)


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atlovesbm 4 years ago from Orange County, California

Awww this is so sweet and passionate. Well done! You put a lot of heart into your writing which makes it so beautiful! :)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi atlovesbm: thank you for this. I put my heart into the people and things in life that I love. I love writing Love Poems and anything with a Romantic theme. Or anything where exploring feelings can be part of it. :)


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epigramman 4 years ago

...well I am back to revisit a classic and it really doesen't get any better than this - what a poetic declaration of pure love - must grace my Facebook page with such beauty and dedicate it both to you - so look over the rainbow and you will see this on my homepage with my respects and admiration for you both.

lake erie time ontario canada 5:41pm


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echoe0021 4 years ago from Conway, AR

That was a beautiful poem and so loving. So much emotion came through. Impressive.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Colin, what a nice comment today. :)

Yes, this poem is about Fehl, and she loves it so much. Heh. "Look over the rainbow"... I love that. Thank you for the Facebook mention Colin. I will do the same. :) Have a sweet day at Lake Erie and in nice Ontario. :)

Hi echoe0021, thank you for this. I love romantic poems, especially for beautiful amazing people like Fehl. :)


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

what a wonderful sensual poem.. you outdid yourself. bravo.. so glad i found you.

blessing

Debbie


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Debbie, oh thank you for this. um, yes it is sensual. I can be like that at times. Heh. :)


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Emotions and feelings beautifully described in words. This is simply beautiful!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi billybuc, I felt so inspired to write this for a very special person in my life. Thank you. :)


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SanneL 4 years ago from Sweden

Your words filled with love and adoration for that special person in your life shines through so strong in this very sensual and oh, so beautiful poem. Wow!! You're so good!!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Sannel, gee you are reading a lot of my poems these days. LOL. Thank you so much. :)

Yes it is a love poem and it is the world's worst kept secret. Fehl is amazing and so talented. Plus more ... but I will spare her blushes. Heh. Trying to leave passion out of my poems is like trying to keep the cat out of the fish bowl... LOL.

Aw you are a great poet too, and I so love your writing, Sannel. Have a sweet day, my friend. :)


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

A breath taking poem of passion and love!!


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi rahul0324, thank you for reading my poem. Wow, Fehl would love seeing these comments. :)


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wisdom25 4 years ago from San Tan Valley

Astra I am truly addicted to your poetry. lol..Great photos as well. Much Love and Respect


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi wisdom25 once again... you are certainly reading my poetry today. LOL. Wow you are a true fan. Um, what is so sppealing about it, or should I guess?

Thank you for checking my poetry. I appreciate your comments so much. Have a sweet day. :)


NikiiLeeReyes 4 years ago

Astra, Astra, Astra...

You've done it again.

And I, I need to quote you for a second..

"I want to blow kisses

right into your mind."

I loved this poem!

My oh my, this is one of the best of the best!

She is a lucky lady indeed.

Lovely words; written by a lovely lady.

Always happy to appreciate wonderful writing!

-Nika.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Oh wow Nika... Hi baby. :) *Hugs you like crazy*

I missed you, Nika. Where did you go? I have been missing your amazing beautiful hubs so much, and your awesome writing and creative imagination.... LOL :P

Oh I wrote this um... it was a few months ago. :) It is for Fehl. Yes, she is a very Special Woman.

I am so happy to see you back here again, and I hope you stay longer... :) Thank you for the lovely comments on my new hubs. Sending you warm smiles today:)

- Cathy xx


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

What a beautiful poem and so genuine and sincere, like walking on a cloud number nine! Amazing loving gift for a sweet girl like Fehl! =)


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you BeyondMax, the inspiration is all Fehl. And her name is perfect for having in the title of a poem that is, after all, about her. LOL. How could I not write this for her, as she is very special. Hope your day is great. :)


NikiiLeeReyes 4 years ago

Oh you kid at me?!

lol hubpages have been monitoring my work.

(killing me softly) lol

*Hugs back*

Im back though my dear;

and I hope to bring more smiles--

coming your way!

-nika


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Nika, you have me smiling now, and yes I did miss your hubs and amazing writing. And yes, you too. :)

What have you been doing. I know you have been working hard. Let me know.

LOL. Yes, Hub Pages always emails us with our hub traffic updates. I am so glad you are back. Enjoy your weekend. You always bring smiles. :)

Have a sweet day, Nika.

- Cathy


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epigramman 4 years ago

...so this is where all of the hot and beautiful people hang out I see and little wonder because the amazingingly lovely Cathy is just one hot beautiful poet, writer and thinker - sending you warm wishes and good energy to you from lake erie time 7:31pm and in a shameless act of self promotion please check out my new one - The boastful bellhop of Satyr Hotel


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Colin, thank you for the lovely comments. Heh. I am smiling at the comments you put here. The hot people? There must be some mistake. LOL. :P

I always appreciate your visits, and yes, please check my new ones too. I enjoy your poems. They always mesmerise me, Colin. The Bellhop poem sounds interesting. :)


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Love is amazing , life is a mystery ! How i envied this poem..one is so lucky if she has given a piece like this.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Hi Angel: yes love is amazing, especially when it is that special person we love so much. I would do anything for her, she is my angel.

I feel lucky too, Angel. thank you for the nice comments. :)


IntegrityYes 4 years ago

That is another great one.


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space Author

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)

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