You Invaded My Privacy


You invaded my privacy with your smile and laughter

Handsomeness and understanding heart

I always thought men are so impossible

To understand a woman feeling, but then I realized

You were so different right from the very start


In love I see in your eyes...

Is the love that equals to mine

You chase my sadness away and wipe all my tears

You told me that no matter what happen, you’ll always be near

Gentleness, compassionate, you were to me


You know everything about me that no one else knew

In our private moment us two alone

I showed you something...the truth of me

The beauty unseen start to bloom beautifully

Like a pretty butterfly coming out from its cocoon


My personality has shown the truth of me...

Not pretense but the real of me

Compassionate sent a message to you...

For your heart to love me more

As passion build quickly with a kiss


You hold me close, my heart became to race as your lip trace

From my forehead to my cheek, then down to my lip and unto my neck

Your hand strokes my hair...gently...

Brought Goosebumps chills run through my spine

I subside into your arm...we made love all night


Morning sunrise has appeared before our eyes

And there you are slept next to me

Still you were there beside

Resting my head against your chest as you greet me with

Your morning kiss


And years after years, from one centuries to the next

From ten years to seventy years

We still hold each other hands

Our wedding ring still worn on our ring finger...left hand

Vena amori


The finger of love that leads to our heart

Kept us together...forever

Until we are grown old and gray

Forever until the day we’ll be in our grave

But even after death, love still remain

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icciev 5 years ago from Kuwait

Awesome, Loved it so romantic. voted up


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dungeonraider 5 years ago from United States

Your tenacity is paying off as much as your writing is improving. Passion is something that cannot be taught and you have it. And no one can ever take that from you. I'm impressed with your drive to succeed.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi iccieve and Dungeon, thanks. I'm glad that my writing is improve and I hope it continues. thank you!


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

wow...true love makes my eyes watery...


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi raciniwa, thank you. true love is amazing!


Derdriu 5 years ago

Chanroth: Wow! What rhythmic flow, teeming images and tender truths you manage to compact into one endearing, provocative poem!

Thank you, voted up, etc.,

Derdriu


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Derdriu, thank you! :)


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lyns 5 years ago from USA

Very romantic, feel the passion, thanks for sharing. lyns


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi lyn, thank you!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Awesome poem! Loved it!


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Gypsy, thank you! :)

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