You Too

 

Its eating away at all of us

Were all dying

Were all soon to be dead

Then what

An ending

That sounds nice

From beginning

To ends end

It wont start again

When to be done

Lets go inside of it

Ill pluck a flower

Ill plant its seed

Outside the means

It’ll glow upon its bloom

When will it crumble

I wait for it to blow away

You should watch me with me.

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Joshua Kell 6 years ago from Arizona

Beautiful and ominous. Thunderous, menacing, and hopeful. I loved it. Thank you.


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

i loved this

way to go

xo


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blackreign2012 6 years ago

Bravo! ~hugs~


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Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

where was the moon,

by golly she been

playing the same tune,

i just got out of hospital , love this one.. ~aloha~


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Good to see

You Sa`ge


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Entwinds 6 years ago

The words you say

Take me away

They way you speak the way you write

Its an amazing site.

I enjoyed this very much. your amazing


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Joy56 6 years ago

food for thought


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Gluttony For Thought


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Joy56 6 years ago

eat eat eat, then spew a bit back up, and keep the goodness, how disgusting is that.


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Tara Tufford 6 years ago from Columbus, Ohio

Your work really is mesmerizing awful.


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LittleMonster95 6 years ago

You're great. I loved this.

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