Poem. Mother You left without saying goodbye

This poem was extremely painfull to write, it doesn't flow how I would like,

through tears and sobs I've penned this ode and mistakes I've made a few,

but the heartfelt sentiment is pure gold, Mother I really miss you.

You left without saying goodbye,

it was only after the event, I found out,

numbed me to the core, made me cry,

the news stifled within me a mournful shout,

tears of sadness flooded my view,

my breath ached in my chest,

my world undone – now what to do,

I really don't know for the best,

my beloved mother why, why, why,

I'm no longer psychedelic just sombre blue,

why did you leave without saying goodbye,

is that what you really wanted to do,

you've been my rock of ages all my life,

in dignity you loved me most,

even when I caused you strife,

about me you loved to boast,

held my hand when I've been afraid,

kept me warm when I was cold,

paid my bills when they needed to be paid,

my problems in life you resolved,

I'm a ship lost at sea, I drift without a rudder,

you were the only one who loved and believed in me,

I'm lost without my mother,

no words that I express can say how I feel,

there's nothing that can be undone,

if I wrote a million words, it wouldn't make it less real,

my biggest regret..............I've lost my mom

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HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

Heart warming wishes! :)


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Mark Psychedlic 5 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

thankyou my dear x


lostwithinmyself 5 years ago

What a beautiful but very sad poem hun. Such heart felt, I had a lump in my throat just reading it. I am very sorry for your loss. x


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Thelma Alberts 5 years ago from Germany

Very beautiful poem. Sorry for the lose of your mom. I know how it is. My mother died a few years ago and it is still hard to believe that she is gone. Keep writing as it helps a bit.


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Mark Psychedlic 5 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

thankyou for your support


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mariefontaine 5 years ago from Indianapolis, Indiana

I am here... also on Facebook... Heidi "Raw" Phillips-West ... any time you need to just chat or wanna get something out... I offer myself to you. Write on, new friend. Write on.


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Mark Psychedlic 5 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

I will try what you suggested and every step is slow and painful and this whole hubpage account is in her memory and ill leave a lasting legacy of rhyme covering allsorts of topics I'm at my best when I'm writing, my mother did'nt really see that side of me although she knew I did write poetry. Thankyou for your lovely kind words and encouragement bless you Namaste


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mariefontaine 5 years ago from Indianapolis, Indiana

Keep writing your way through it... that is when I began to write for the first time, when I lost my Mama to cancer of an unknown primary. It was in 8 parts of her body by the time she passed away. Grief is one of the oddest human emotions... and also the most selfish. We are not sad for our Mama's... me or you... we are sad for ourselves because WE don't have our Mamas anymore.

Cycle through the process. There will be times when you feel like you get sucker punched dead off in the gut by grief... and you will cry, sob even. Let yourself cry... but don't wallow in it... go through the process... be at peace...


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Mark Psychedlic 5 years ago from Birmingham UK Author

Thankyou Mandy that means a lot to me bless you Namaste


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mandypoole 5 years ago from UK

Beautiful poem, very tender and real. Very sad, but you have conveyed your heartbreak and loss so very well. Thanks for sharing.

Mandy

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