You'll Do It All Again , Won't You?

MUSIC Up-tempo Country and Western style.


Did you think that I was dumb,

I'd believe the lines you spun,

As though my life had just begun.

Did you?


How could you spout those lies,

Thinking I'd not realise,

No truth could come from you.

How could you?


I've seen your kind before

And I've shown them out the door,

Whatever made you think,

That you could fool me?


CHORUS

I've had a fruitful life,

Though, of course there has been strife,

But I learned from my mistakes.

Along the way.

Then you come along and smile,

Mouthing sweetness all the while,

Saying I'm the only one

And you will stay.


HA! I'm afraid your time is up,

We'll never drink from the same cup.

You go your own way now....

Will you?


Let me get on with my life.

I'll forget you passed my way

You'll go find another fool.

Won't you?


yes you'll do it all again..

Won't you?






This man is the REAL deal.
This man is the REAL deal.

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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

Does that guy age well or what? My goodness, how is it possible for a man to look that good? Him and Sean Connary...they really tick me off. LOL

But I love your song...had me tapping my foot to imaginary music...well done, Dim!


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain Author

Thanks billybuc.

Kris Kris is amazing isn't he?


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mckbirdbks 2 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Those are some lyrics, that is for sure. I can easily see it set to music and you will become a famous song writer and travel the world. Seriously.


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain Author

Love the way you see me. If only it were true.

Thanks so much for your comment.


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shanmarie 2 years ago from Texas

Reminds me of lyrics I wrote in high school. True to life. Anyone of any cage can relate to these lyrics.


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain Author

Pleasedto meet you on hubpages shanmarie


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Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

Yes, you could very well be a great song writer, but do not forget your friends on HP! Love that photo, and the one of the beautiful butterfly and flowers !

Up and more, tweeting and pinning

Have a great evening,

Faith Reaper


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain Author

Hi faith Reaper.

Don't think there's any danger of me hitting the music scene at my age.

I enjoy messing around on the piano and writing the lyrics, though.

Thank you for your support.

Dim


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

A wonderful hub Dim; so interesting and enjoyable.

Voting up, sharing and wishing you a great day.

Eddy.


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain Author

Thank you Eddy.

You are always so encouraging to me.


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tirelesstraveler 2 years ago from California

You should do a video on song writing. Love this song.


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain Author

Not sure that l am good enough for that but l appreciate you saying it.

Thanks a lot.


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Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

I would love to hear these wonderful lyrics put to song…they are very good. And Kris Kristofferson. (Be still my heart. :-) Still a very handsome man whose character shines through the years, and so well.


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain Author

So true what you say about Kris. Kris.

Thank you for liking my little ditty (small song)


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manatita44 2 years ago from london

Seen your man before. Great actor. Nice poem. Thanks.


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain Author

great comment,. Thank you.


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PegCole17 2 years ago from Dallas, Texas

That guy in your poem really gets around. I wasted a few years on him. Would make a great song, Dim.


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Dim Flaxenwick 2 years ago from Great Britain Author

Ha! Ha! Great comment. Cheers.!

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