Your Breath Is Life

Your Breath Is LIfe
Your Breath Is LIfe


It's dark and there is no light

No sound no moon no fright

It is quiet there is no sound

There is nothing nowhere to be found

But then you breath and it's all so bright

And with every breath you breath

There comes new sounds new life

Birds, Bees, Flowers, Trees

Mountains,Forests,Deserts Seas

So many things for the eye to see

But something is missing

What could it be

So a smile crosses his face and he breathes you

And breathes me

A breath is all that it took

A thought from his mind

To create everything in a second of his time

How can we thank you for all that you do

For all of your love and your forgiveness too

How did you decide you wanted us to live

Why are we so blessed

Your son to us you did give

Your love is stronger than anything you made

And yet we still don't appreciate

Well I too have love

That I can give to you

As strong as all the thing that you create

And as beautiful as them too

I give to you my heart and soul

So you can keep it safe

And so that you know in your heart

That I live each day with Faith

Knowing that you love me

And you will come for me

When you decide it is the right time

To bring me home and set me free

For loving father..from your loving daughter


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sybil salazar 4 years ago


I thought that was the most beautiful poem ive heard in a long long time, you do such an awesome job keep it up my friend!! ;")

Donna 4 years ago

Nice! I really enjoyed it ...thank you for sharing.

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stars439 4 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Very beautiful dear heart. GBY

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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

thank you stars439 so happy you liked it :o)

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drpastorcarlotta 4 years ago from BREAKOUT MINISTRIES, INC. KC

Beautiful poem, Voted-Up! Beautiful.... Thank you! Come visit.

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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

thank you drpastorcarlotta, I am so happy you liked it. It has been awhile for me and I hope I can continue to keep people coming back :o)

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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

thank you Sybil, I so happy you liked it xoxo

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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

thank you Donna so happy you enjoyed it xoxo

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BlossomSB 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

What a beautiful poem; it is just lovely. It is such a privilege being one of God's children, no matter how old we are, and what a loving Father we have! Voted up and beautiful.

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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

thank you BlossomSB, I agree and I am one who can say I truly love him with all my heart. I'm so happy you liked my poem and I hope you read more of them..God bless :o)

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Mekenzie 4 years ago from Michigan

Tracey, this is lovely and flows beautifully. I know it delights Father God's heart.

God Bless YOU!


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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

Mekenzie, that you so much I think he is the one who inspires me to write so I hope he enjoys it..God bless you too :o)

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Rolly A Chabot 4 years ago from Alberta Canada

Look at you go... well done and it warms the heart to be back... my you have grown indeed...

Hugs from Canada

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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

thank you Rolly, and it's great to be back. I missed all of you so much. I hope I keep on growing too xoxo :o)

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Anjili 4 years ago from planet earth, a humanoid

Hi Tracy,

This is beautiful. A wonderful tribute to our Lord for the grace bestowed upon us by breath. Well done. Keep up with it. Voted up and beautiful

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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

Anjili, thank you for your wonderful comments happy to see you stopped by. You must come and read more often and I will read yours as well. have a blessed life :o)

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bluebird 4 years ago

A beautiful poem. You did well. I thank God and you for this.

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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

Bluebird, thank you for your kind words. I also give thanks to God for he is the one who gives me inspiration. Have a blessed day :o) xoxo

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Storytellersrus 4 years ago from Stepping past clutter

Your faith is beautiful and shines through this poem. Thanks for stopping by my Demented Dog poem! You gave me a meditation for this day.

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Tracy711 4 years ago Author

thank you Storytellersrus, I'm happy you liked it and yes my faith is what I live by every day of my life..God bless and I loved your poem also xoxo

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