Your light [Poem]

I see your light

darkened until now

by extinguished,

cold,

unmanned

planets.

The glare reaches

my soul

already conscious

of her

existence.

My eyes,

never tired

of you,

are full

of you.

Nights are lightened

by your presence,

that drags

new dreams

to fly.

You are my star.

I see you.

I feel you.

I love you.


When do you feel more love in the air?

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nenytridiana 5 years ago from Probolinggo - Jawa Timur - Indonesia

A beautiful shiny poem Lorenzo27. I am glad I didn't miss it. Good work! Thank you!


mathira 5 years ago

Wonderful and touching poem of love,Lorenzo.I liked it.


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Silvertip01 5 years ago from West Virginia, USA

good stuff lorenzo. Are you writing this to someone in particular or are you just coming up with this from the top of your head, man? It is really good, bro.


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Very nice poem Lorenzo.

thank you for sharing.


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

my light...a beautiful poem...


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful light..Enjoyed


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Lorenzo27 5 years ago from Pistoia, Italy Author

Silvertip01, this poem is dedicated to my girl. Thanks for your comments, friends.


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Genna East 5 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

Very nice, Lorenzo.


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MsDora 5 years ago from The Caribbean

What powerful love you describe! Intersting.


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Voted up awesome and beautiful , thanks for the read :)


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Nelly A. 5 years ago

Wow... it's a lovely poem.


Wolfsegg 5 years ago

Very touching poem... It's beautiful. Voted up!

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