Your Time (poem)

Here is your time this moment meant for you

To touch the world and show it who you are

A peaceful scent perhaps a shooting star

A destiny now opens to your view


Yours is the voice heard calling from afar

A whispered sigh perhaps a windswept coup

I’m here oh world now watch what I can do

It’s time to bring your fashion to bazaar


And days to minutes join the passing stream

To hide in caverns shaded from the sun


A misty shadow comes to claim this dream

And though you fight you know it has begun


As you awake to world with strange new gleam

Here is your time enjoy what you have done

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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

This is an interesting poem. When you makes me feel like you are stronger, that is good. Loved it. Had to vote up.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. It captures and holds you.

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myownlife 4 years ago from london

Awesome, Great job

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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I'm not much on poetry; in fact, I only read the poetry of maybe five hubbers on a regular basis. Note: I read yours. That should tell you how I feel about your work.

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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

I so much loved this line. "To touch the world and show it who you are."

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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Mh, can I just say I love your ability to use videos?!

Great poem! :)

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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

You showed the world who you are and that is a fabulous poet. Amazing poem!

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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Loved it. Love your play on words..Cheers

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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Hatter - Voting up across the board on this.

I think it may just be one of my favorites.

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LikaMarie 4 years ago

I liked the imagery. :)

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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

This reminds me of days of old, when handmade colors adorn the walls of caves. We can still smell the smoke from the cooking fires, and a few bones are still left as remnants in the sandy soil. Bravo! Voted awesome and up!

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Crystal Tatum 4 years ago from Georgia

Oh, this is lovely! Very uplifting. Voted up

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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

This is beautiful piece of poetry...

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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

lovely masterpiece!

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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

very wonderful! voted all!

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anusujith 4 years ago from Nilambur, Kerala, India

Great lines...

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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Simply beautiful poetry, so very well done. Voting up

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CrazedNovelist 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

I like the idea of coming out into the world and gaining new experiences. Very cool writing, friend. It was a pleasure reading it!


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ignugent17 4 years ago

Very interesting " As you awake to world with strange new gleam" .

Voted up and more!

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