Poem: Forever.


"Forever" came from the longing of my heart, to be with my Saviour and Lord and I hope it will touch your heart as it is the true cry of myne.

I love to write poetry to tell a story in a story and to see if you can understand the deeper meaning of the poem.

Poems became a mighty tool as to spread the good news in the form of inspirational material.


Forever You promises
Faith I must possess
An heir you will make me
In Your Kingdom, soon to see


Loving You so deep
You will be my peep
Forever I will discover
Peaceful under your cover


No more tears
Wailing in my ears
No more death
A new day on this earth


Forever I will be with You
Nothing to separate me from my Youth
Happiness so satisfied
As I play on the field


Shining like the son
A clone of the perfect One
All suffering now gone
As we became one


Will I see you there?
Or will it be too much to bear?
No sin will have an entry
Are you feeling guilty?


Yeshua is the Rescuer
Before you end up on a skewer
Are you mortified?
It is now time to be modified.

By Louis Fourie


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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

A literary verse calling for us all to straighten up and fly right if we are to pass through Heaven's door...a nice reminder. Thanks! WB

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lxxy 6 years ago from Beneath, Between, Beyond

Love the ending lines. ;)

Modified/mortified. Interesting alliteration. :)

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stars439 6 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Wonderful poetry. You write very well, and your poems are very nice. God Bless You.

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singlmomat52 6 years ago

I am not afraid to die but I do want to stay here a while longer to experience the gift of life that He gave me. Wonderful poem. Thank you!!

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His daughter 6 years ago

You certainly have a gift in your poetry, louiscfoure. May God increase that ability and talent.

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fred allen 6 years ago from Myrtle Beach SC

I can hear the beat of your heart in this. Thank you for sharing it.

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Apostle Jack 6 years ago from Atlanta Ga

Your rhyming is good,and you have a great message.

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