What about Me and Me?


What about me?


What about me and me?


         Is there time left for me?


     Is there time left for me and me?

So heavy on my heart


           Is killing me inside


    I'll try to run so I can get cover


But this is not going to stop me



 And I won't let me hurt by any other

         I'm not getting another night in desperation
         
            I was longing for your touch
               
        But it was not enough
                      
          So I'm getting ready!

     Don't get the wrong impression

  There is no more feelings

And only left me and me

I got nothing left to say

     I'm breaking free

      So what about me?,





I'll fly away

13 comments

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Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

The strings that tether us can only be cut by ourselves. Lift the veil, and fly Motricio. I feel your pain. I'm here with you. Hugs.


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motricio 6 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia Author

See! I wrote another :) Thnx Beth.


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Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

That's wonderful!!! And your poem is vivid with emotion. Thank you, Motricio, for writing it. :)


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tantrum 6 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

I love the way you construct your phrases. Amazing !! Go on with this writing! It's wonderful !! Sentimientos muy profundos !! Me encanta ! :)


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motricio 6 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia Author

All right Tantrum ;)


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Laura du Toit 6 years ago from South Africa

Unusual, unique and very expressive. I love the way you express yourself! Tantrum was right. Very interesting poetry!

Well done and thanks for sharing!


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aefrancisco 6 years ago from somewhere down the road

AWESOME!


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motricio 6 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia Author

Thank you, aefrancisco =)


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sunbrite 6 years ago from USA

Nice, very nice!


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motricio 6 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia Author

Hi there sunbrite.

See you like it, thanks for stopping by.


ralwus 6 years ago

Grief can take care if itself, but to get the full value of a joy you must have somebody to divide it with. I do hope you find someone to play math with.


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motricio 6 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia Author

-Ralwus, Someone will find me eventually, I'm not looking for anymore.


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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Beautifuly Honest...Motrcio;)

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