I read your hubs "I Have Inside Me the Blood of Kings" and "I Was Born to be King". I think I got those names right. I found them under epic poetry and I believe the first one was featured. Anyway, I thought both showed tremendous depth when it came to building a character. Both held my interest and left me wanting to know more.
I don't really feel qualified to point out weak points. I will say in the first hub I wanted... more. You spanned considerable time and I would have loved to have heard more about the day to day events that drove this man to the choices he made.
I think you have tremendous talent and look forward to reading more of your hubs.