i wrote some stories that i want to be criticized, which is why i joined hubpages in the first place
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there's not much to criticize about your story, I like it a lot.
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Asking and answering questions is a good way to get noticed. :)
comment at other hubpages, they will comment to your hubpages too
Where are they? I'll take a look. No guarantees.
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