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Diana L Pierce says
I appreciate it! I had considered this as well, but the problem is that the character that does know is going to ask the main character to do something based on this particular event, and it's from there that the story actually gets going.
That's fascinating! I"ll give that a look! Sounds like a great story :)
The Examiner-1 says
Thanks for the input! I had thought about this, but I don't think there's any way around revealing what the past was any later than halfway through simply because the rest of the plot relies on her eventually figuring it out (if she doesn't remember
Have you thought about rearranging your plot so that it would work?
...I haven't...though that is definitely a good idea. As it is, I'm playing with different writing structures to portray different perspectives/times, so maybe I could rearrange it in that way. Very interesting idea :)
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