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What is wrong with this sentence?


The beautiful young woman sauntered slowly as she went across the restaurant's main dining areai so that she could give all of the men a good opportunity to appreciate her gorgeous face and perfect body

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Best Answer Mara Alexander (MonkeyShine75) says

18 months ago
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    Paula (fpherj48) 18 months ago

    Mara...EXCELLENT. In fact, this is a perfect response...!


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David Hunt (UnnamedHarald) says

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Paula (fpherj48) says

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    TIMETRAVELER2 18 months ago

    Except that she forgot the missing period at the end of the sentence! And yes, I did want to see how alert you guys were. Great job!


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Ronald E. Franklin (RonElFran) says

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RTalloni says

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peachy (peachpurple) says

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