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When my head was bald

and I didn't have teeth,

I was reliant on others for sustenance.

I didn't question

and I believed what I was told.


When my head was blonde

and I had only baby teeth,

I was reliant on others for sustenance.

I began to question

But I believed what I was told.


When my head was long

and i had my grown up teeth,

I relied on myself for sustenance.

I had lots or questions

and a mind of my own.


When my head is thin

and I still have all my teeth,

will I rely on others for sustenance?

I'll still have many questions

and a mind of my own.


When my head is bald

and I don't have any teeth,

I'll rely on others for sustenance.

Will I have answers to my questions

and do what i am told?




all rights reserved. copyright Justin W. Price Jan 19, 2012.

My poetry collection

Thanks for Reading.

A FREELANCE WRITER, HONORS STUDENT AND GOVER PRIZE FINALIST, JUSTIN W. PRICE (AKA, PDXKARAOKEGUY) CONSIDERS HIMSELF A POET FIRST AND FOREMOST BUT IS ALSO A SHORT STORY, BIOGRAPHER AND HUMOR WRITER. HIS POETRY COLLECTION,DIGGING TO CHINA, WILL BE RELEASED FEBRUARY 2ND, 2013 BY SWEATSHOPPE PUBLICATIONS AND IS CURRENTLY AVAILABLE ON AMAZON AS WELL AS YOUR LOCAL BOOKSELLER.

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PDXKaraokeGuy 3 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks dgh. I appreciate the kind words!


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Awesome hub about the circle of life. Votes ++++++ with shares.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks Deborah. I really appreciate that!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Oh the circle of life.. Great Job.. wonderful poem

voted up

have a blessed day

Debbie


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks Linda. I'm glad you enjoyed this!


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Sunshine625 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

The circle of life. Well done PDX! Thank you for Elton's video, it's been a while since I heard that song:)


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Steele, thanks for reading and commenting. I'm not much of a math or physics guy but I've heard of the Fibonacci and algorithmic spirals. Not that I could explain them, but I've heard of them... Thanks for reading :-)


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Steele Fields 4 years ago from drexel hill,pa

Kind of reminds me of a little ditty my poetry professor once quipped: "Babies heads have little hair. Old men's heads are just as bare. Between the cradle and the grave, lies a haircut and a shave." Saw your pic and was wondering if you were familiar with Fibonacci and the algorithmic spiral? Either way, thumbs up!

Steele


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks Martie. i like being someone's favorite. That always feels nice. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for commenting!


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

There are too many questions without an answer and too many answers for only one question. The more you know, the more you realize how little you know and will ever know of life and death and everything it entails.

You are a philosopher - my favorite kind of friend... But note, I love all kinds with all my heart....


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

It's easy to ponder whilst listening to Elton. Thanks Pickles!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

awww, thanks Frank. That's a nice compliment!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

lol. brilliant comment, Ann


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

This one gave me food for thought. Worthy questions which I still ponder as I listen to Elton. Vote up!


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

You are a unique and different writer/Hubber.. simply amazing :)


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anndavis25 4 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

I was going to comment, but everybody said what I wanted to say, so I rely on them for sustenance.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks Ruby. he is pretty fabulous


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks Cheryl. Indeed, it is a circle.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks MM. it's a great song, even though it's from a kids movie. I think it gets diminished because of that


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

I came back to watch the Elton John video, i must say that it brought a tear, so very beautiful.. I love Elton and his giving heart. Thank you..You made my day..


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

Life is a circle and you have depicted it well, thanks for sharing :)


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

The circle of life, a fabulous poem and Elton John's song so very beautiful, brilliant work and voted up!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks Goego :-)


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks Debby. it's always nice to see you around here!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks Ruby. Getting people to think is very important to me. Thanks so much for thinking and reading and commenting!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

thanks b lamin. You're probably right!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

vellur, excellent point. I'm glad you enjoyed this and thank you for taking the time to comment!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

They seem to be trending upward for me as well...


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Kelly, I agree. But it's still frustrating sometimes!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Gypsy, thank you. the mind is very important and so is pondering, but I suppose it's also important to know when you aren't going to know the answers.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

lol. Thanks Raciniwa!


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goego 4 years ago from Loserland

A verbal vortex of wonder... trye fecta


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Debby Bruck 4 years ago

Good one, Justin. Applause and approval of these inquiries with and without answers as we birth and age. Blessings, Debby


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

As you complete the circle of life, there will still be questions. They may be unspoken, but they are there..I like this Justin..Made me think..You have that ability. ( To make the reader think )


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b. Malin 4 years ago

How very Clever and yet a Poignant read KaraokeGuy...Don't ever stop Pondering...Or Questioning...It probably takes a Lifetime to have all the answers.


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

A great hub with a new approach. We might not get all the answers, but still we keep searching. I believe travelling with hope is better than arriving.Voted up.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

I think ponderings increase as you get older--they did for me--


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RealHousewife 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

I like how you wrote this...pretty clever!

I like knowing that there are mysteries that will never be solved - life would be so boring if we had every answer:)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Great hub. I admire your creativity. Down the line what I most want is a clear and intuitive mind. If that can be achieved I'll be O.K.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

well, i find the circle circling...lol...i find this poem refreshing Justin...


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

wd, that's hilarious. I was tri-daily for awhile... My knees aren't what they used to be ;-)


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thank you michelle. I appreciate your reads!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

ashes to ashes dust to dust, right Jim?


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Ray, I don't know what I'm hoping for but I do know that when I see old people, they seem to be at peace generally and content with their lives and what they know and don't know. I want to be that. Thanks for reading!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Tammy, I just hope I can get to a point of contentment if I don't have the answers... Glad you enjoyed this.


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WD Curry 111 4 years ago from Space Coast

This reminds me of Leonardo Davinci's "The Ages of Man"'

It also reminds me of of the seasons of love making in a relationship.

1. Try weekly

2.Tri-weekly

3. Try weakly


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Wonderful hub. I enjoy reading them and am waiting to read more.


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TheManWithNoPants 4 years ago from Tucson, Az.

The circle of life. From diapers we came and to diapers we go. Excellent job my friend.

jim


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Cagsil 4 years ago from USA or America

An interesting read Justin. It seems as though you were only reliant upon yourself during one time in your life, but been reliant on others during the rest. I can understand the meaning of your thoughts and it seems like you're still waiting on something which you might never receive? I don't know exactly what that might be, but I could hazard to guess. I read your other hub with regards to religion and the scriptures you were questioning, which I can only assume has a part in your looking for answers. I've written many hubs to address common questions and sooner or later you'll find them. Nicely written. :)


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

Very creative! This is one of the best philosophical questions of literature. I really hope one day we will get the answers to our questions. This is great!


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PDXKaraokeGuy 4 years ago from Portland, Oregon Author

Thanks Audrey. I seem to be at that age where I am pondering these things. I suppose we all do at some point... Thanks for reading and commenting!


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Just an excellent write Justin! Bravo!

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