Fine Red Wine

You swept me off my feet

Like a fine red wine

Made me complete

In an essence

So divine

The sweet nectar

Leaving vision

To the blind

Stirring something within

Awakening

Creeping in

Opening up many layers

That were once so closed

So cold

Melting whatever was left

Letting life unfold

When it opened up

There was no stopping it

From release

The magic had it's way

Waiting all this time

To laugh and

To play

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Ericdierker 2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Well written


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois

Sounds like you've found joy, yea...Beautiful!


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

loved it like fine wine..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Flowed like the best red wine. Cheers!


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Romeos Quill 2 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

An exquisite unveiling of loving feeling when those velveteen thuds first roll out the red carpet in anticipatory excitement - so much in there too. Thanks for sharing Caroline.

Warm Regards;

R.Q.


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wayne barrett 2 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Intoxicating! Voting up, my dear.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Eric thank you :)

Ruby thank you for your sweet words. :)

Frank thank you :)

Gypsy thank you my friend. :)

Romeo thank you for your wonderful poetic thoughts. :)

Wayne thank you to you :)


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manatita44 2 years ago from london

Sweet and touching, Caroline.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Manatita. :)


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ardhendudey 2 years ago from Jamshedpur

Very exclusive, beautiful and touching. Thumb up for the hub. Liked a lot.


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carolinemd21 2 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Ardhendudey for your kind words. :)

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