Poem: Flowers of Eden- Hear me! Help me!

photos from Ms. Suiton


Hear me! Oh hear me!-

Flowers of Eden!

Make my senseless thoughts be vanished.

Refresh it with your colorful beauty,

Part of your innocence-

Oh please share me!


Let your fragrance embraced me,

'Til it enters my veins.

Let my body sway as you dance gracefully

Together with the reckless wind.

Hear me! Oh hear me!


Share me your dreams,

Your genuine cry

Enough to catch anyone in a spell

Cast a spell on me!


Make me forget the pain of fighting,

My weaknesses...

My doubts...

My confusions...

My sorrows...

Even just for a while.


But...

hoping it will last!

'til I become strong

'til I recover my energy,

my courage from nothingness

and conquer my fears.

Hear me! Oh hear me!


Wake me up! Wake me up!

From the night I'm escaping

Let me hold the thorns encircling you

Just to pull me out from the darkness teasing me

Oh help me! Help me!


Flowers of Eden

Please! Let me sleep

In the bed of your peacefulness.

Enchant me with the music of your dreams

And let me stay in your stainless heart


Oh hear me! Hear me!

Oh help me! Help me!

In life, there are times that we are so depressed, not knowing what to do, can't find someone to talk to and thinking that we are alone, useless and hopeless. Everything seemed worst.

With these negative thoughts, our spirit weakens and we are vulnerable to commit mistakes... instead of drowning ourselves in agony and pain, why not set your mind to just focus on things to uplift the spirit? We might even find a refuge in nature. We can share our agony and let it hear our plea until the caress of its power set us free...free from sheer desperation!

Always remember God made all things with a purpose so cheer up!!!

Appreciate things around and be happy! :)

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prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

great poems. thanks for share.


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D.A.L. 7 years ago from Lancashire north west England

I could not agree more with your final comments. You may like to visit my hub local lakes an oasis of tranquility.

great poem. fantastic photographs.


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

I hear your soulful cry...


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

That was lovely. Thank you.


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warrioRR 6 years ago from Rawalpindi Pakistan

I love to read it agian

Great work


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Joy56 6 years ago

that was almost like one of the Psalms written by David, pleading to god for help. It was very well written, and moving, and your choice of pictures....... beautiful.


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

...thank you all for dropping by and leaving a comment, I really appreciate it and these comments serve as one of my inspirations! thanks again..^.^!


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niallmarkey 6 years ago from New York

Very beautiful poem! Inspirational and moving.


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

hello Sir!^.^... thank you very much for the comment! :)


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epigramman 6 years ago

Well like the art and beauty of flowers we can now add the thrill of your hubs - so fine so righteous so pure so divine so you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient Author

hello Sir epigramman! ^.^ thank you verryy muccchh for appreciating this!

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