Can I Forgive me please?


Could you please forgive me?


      Oh my  Dirty hands

I can only see my underfoot land


    I never meant to hurt you

Only guilt will make you understand


        Can't heal this overwhelming wounds

Ever lasting unavoidable sounds


Touch me

        Feel me

    But only forgiving will make me feel


I could be death.






       Could I please, forgive me?!


Touch me

                   Feel me

  Is such a feeling

Sooner or later

      Just need to stand

until my dinner's waiter steps


13 comments

"Quill" 6 years ago

Well done...touches deeply

Blessings


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Petra Vlah 6 years ago from Los Angeles

A real treat, Thank You


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motricio 6 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia Author

Thnx very much Quill & Petra

=)


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shazwellyn 6 years ago from Great Britain

Very artie! Thanks x


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motricio 6 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia Author

You're welcome Shaz =)


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prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US

hey this is touching hah, Gracias Senor, maita


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mega1 6 years ago

I could forgive you - you have done nothing wrong, I'm sure, but I could!


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motricio 6 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia Author

-Maita: De nada ;)

-Mega: I did, I broke a heart.

And it broke mine.


ralwus 6 years ago

Forgiveness is the fragrance that the rose bleeds on the fingers that have crushed it. I can smell it here.


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kurojohns 6 years ago from Muntinlupa, Philippines

Good job.


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motricio 6 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia Author

-Ralwus, absolutely correct.

-kurojohns, Thank you for stopping by and reading. =)


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sunbrite 6 years ago from USA

Nicely done...Thank you for sharing:)


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Woman Of Courage 6 years ago

This is wonderful, and very touching.

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