Forsaken Pill (poem)

I see its shadow calling calling me

I sense the night is falling falling soon

My mind is spinning in this what might be

The end or the beginning of a tune

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Soft memories are playing playing still

Reflections are now swaying swaying so

Do I now swallow this forsaken pill

Into a world that I do not yet know

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I feel its hand now reaching reaching out

Its welcome sighs were breaching breaching tears

Before awaits a destiny of doubt

I fear the ending rending as it nears

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For I have chose to live another day

With heaven’s calling falling far away

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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Beautifully told poem. Voted up and interesting.


Derdriu 4 years ago

MHatter, The adagio and the open door onto the windswept tree form an appropriate sandwich to your poem which begins tremulously and ends bravely.

Respectfully, and with a big Welcome to HubPages, Derdriu


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B. A. Williams 4 years ago from USA

The darkness of the poem keeps you on edge...well done.


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Angelme566 4 years ago

A very well written poem , full of expression,,impressive ! Voted Up !

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