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When she walks by.......

  1. ahorseback profile image54
    ahorsebackposted 4 years ago

    I look at the perfection of God's
    and think
    What if ....
    what if she were made for me
    What if this life of
    tragic banality offered an
    angel just for me
    Then we would know
    hand in hand
    Two of us
    Instead there is only
    her walking by
    and me watching

    1. Gypsy Rose Lee profile image61
      Gypsy Rose Leeposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      You create wonderful images. This poem reminded me of my teenage years when all my friends and I had teen idols and oh, if only we could meet.....

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    i4uposted 4 years ago

    End makes it a poem with all emotions.
    Love is an endless entity.

  3. Denise Handlon profile image89
    Denise Handlonposted 4 years ago

    why did I stop checking into your site for more wonderful poetry from the heart????? Busy is an excuse and a feeble one at that!   

    This is such a beautiful poem and yes, what images.  Thanks for sharing.

  4. ShubeyThePoet profile image60
    ShubeyThePoetposted 4 years ago

    This is nice my man!