What can I say. Simply wonderful. I smell the strawberries, see the red lips and can imagine two people kissing in passion. I loved it. Nothing in this world can smell or taste so sweet as the fruits of passion.
recommended1, I must disagree with you, for you know not poetry. free verse is exactly that free verse. cliched sentences ?? ha,ha,ha . you cold hearted creature . ahorseback.. I don't understand why you don't post your work of poetry on a hub ?