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Rain In the river ........

  1. ahorseback profile image55
    ahorsebackposted 3 years ago

    Rising  unto me she pulls her
    hair to one side moaning
    in soft impatience
    Her eyes brighten and go out of focus she smiles
    as her bottom lip trembles just once
    she arches her back and lowers herself
    deep deep onto me
    just as the rain begins to softly fall
    and then quickens a bit as
    she begins to rock
    ever so slowly
    so slowly
    And the river the rain
    the woman and I

    1. Cantuhearmescream profile image83
      Cantuhearmescreamposted 3 years ago in reply to this

      Wow, Ed... you're going to have people running into the river to cool down! I thought I was coming over to read a tribute to Mother Nature and a babbling brook... there ain't no babbling goin' on here big_smile
      Seriously, this is beautiful Ed, I'm always pleasantly surprised to hear your sensual and romantic words like this!

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    Beth37posted 3 years ago

    It's awfully warm in here.

  3. moonfairy profile image86
    moonfairyposted 3 years ago

    I've come to realize that each time I read something that you write, I'm going to need a cold shower afterwards....LOL! This is great smile

  4. rebekahELLE profile image92
    rebekahELLEposted 3 years ago

    That beat my Monday morning..

  5. Gypsy Rose Lee profile image62
    Gypsy Rose Leeposted 3 years ago

    I think after the flowing you hit the rapids. Passionately wonderful.