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Poppy Fields.

  1. 2uesday profile image87
    2uesdayposted 7 years ago

    Poppies dancing in a field
      do not recall...
      images
      witnessed
      by ancestors.

    1. words cocktail profile image60
      words cocktailposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Because...

      the poppies dancing in a field
      drop and then again yield..
      who would recall..
      images
      any images
      while their own rise and fall.
      Ancestors?

      1. rebekahELLE profile image91
        rebekahELLEposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        images pressed upon
        the
        petals
        gloriously red
        periotting
        on
        tip toe stems
        echoing
        voices from time.

        1. words cocktail profile image60
          words cocktailposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          voices from time..
          heard
          unheard
          no wonder the petals
          say a tale
          gloriously red
          or
          disconsolately pale

          And..in deed
          the poppies dancing in a field
          do not recall...
            images
            witnessed
            by ancestors.

  2. 2uesday profile image87
    2uesdayposted 7 years ago

    I love these responses.

    I put twelve words here at the top of the page and thank you both for replying with such beautiful and descriptive responses.

    1. The Rope profile image60
      The Ropeposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      What a wonderful forum.  I hope everyone sees it - how interesting you all work together!

      1. rebekahELLE profile image91
        rebekahELLEposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        the twelve words at the top were so poignant, they begged to be followed.

        beautiful images that words can paint. I read about word painting a few years ago, and this reminded me of it.

        1. aware profile image70
          awareposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          rebekah you have nice words too nice post

      2. words cocktail profile image60
        words cocktailposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        smile Interesting it is..in deed..Thanks for dropping by and commenting!

      3. 2uesday profile image87
        2uesdayposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Sorry missed this thank you for reading and the comment; I agree it is interesting and inspiring to share words like this.

  3. aware profile image70
    awareposted 7 years ago

    poppy a plant
    driven to extinction
    misunderstood and judged

    endangered its distinction

  4. 2uesday profile image87
    2uesdayposted 7 years ago

    Thank you to everyone who has joined in here and left poetry and comments.

    The responses are especially pleasing as I had almost hidden away my love of creative writing and it is good to be able to share words with other people who feel the same about words.

 
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