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Waiting.

  1. Jackson Riddle profile image67
    Jackson Riddleposted 7 years ago

    We seek to wait
    to wait no more
    More wait is not sought
    sought not at all

    To wait for something
    something to happen
    happen it may just
    just like it may happen

    When it will come
    will it come at all
    All will then wait
    and we will wait some more

    Until one day
    a day we'll wait no more
    more waiting will not take place
    Because waiting's a bore

  2. worldgrandeur profile image67
    worldgrandeurposted 7 years ago

    Beautiful.................
    Why dont you make it a hub...

    1. Jackson Riddle profile image67
      Jackson Riddleposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks, I was considering it but testing the forum water first.

      1. shamelabboush profile image70
        shamelabboushposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        It's very nice.... you dont have to test anything, just post it as a hub and choose a nice photo with it smile

        1. Jackson Riddle profile image67
          Jackson Riddleposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Should I make the hub as a single poem or incorporate some other things I have written and just title it along the lines of "Poetry"?

  3. shamelabboush profile image70
    shamelabboushposted 7 years ago

    And ah, good luck smile

 
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