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Breaking the silence

  1. Seriina profile image60
    Seriinaposted 7 years ago

    The glass I walk upon, are little stars broken into millions of pieces. There, laid out like a blanket on the floor, they rest in front of me. With each step I take, more and more gather underneath my bare feet. My blood turns to ash; each trickle. Nothing to grab onto and no where to go. The sound of  time ticks softly in the warm breeze that sweeps past my face. My tears turn to blood but im glowing my joy.
    But I cant help this fearless smile. The pain that was once sharp and agonizing is now soothing and nurturing…. There I will make my journey through the stars…..

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      sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Are you at the Milkyway in Amsterdam? Don't eat any more of those brownies there stuff in them!

    2. tantrum profile image60
      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      like a masochist ....

    3. angelasbook profile image60
      angelasbookposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Beautifully sad

  2. ediggity profile image61
    ediggityposted 7 years ago

    Deep.
    Snap Snap
    Snap Snap

  3. Seriina profile image60
    Seriinaposted 7 years ago

    LOL NOpe! smile Thank you for the comment

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    Denno66posted 7 years ago

    I suddenly have an urge for rock candy....

    1. tantrum profile image60
      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I'm sure you will find some on your space ship ! big_smile

  5. Seriina profile image60
    Seriinaposted 7 years ago

    NOoooot a masochist......

  6. Lady_E profile image81
    Lady_Eposted 7 years ago

    A deep poem

    Journey through the stars to.....

    (I hope you'll write a part 2) smile

  7. Seriina profile image60
    Seriinaposted 7 years ago

    Thank you, Lady:)

  8. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 7 years ago

    why is it in a forum? hmm and not a hub?

  9. Seriina profile image60
    Seriinaposted 7 years ago

    Its in a hub too!

  10. VampireAlice profile image60
    VampireAliceposted 7 years ago

    i love this poem its awesome.
    you and i are alot alike when it comes to writin.
    i write about immortality thou

 
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