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Who can haiku?

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    Gracious Octoberposted 7 years ago

    5,7,5 is the combination the topic being...Babies

    Suckeling from my bosom hungrily
    I look in your eyes and smile
    Now i know i can

  2. qlcoach profile image73
    qlcoachposted 7 years ago

    Beautiful words. Here is one of mine:
    Radiant Peace bless each hour
      With abundance like a flower
    Love Light warms the blaze
      Thru all the mountain haze

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      Gracious Octoberposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      breathtaking

  3. Pr0metheus profile image60
    Pr0metheusposted 7 years ago

    I thought it was 5,7,5 syllables

    The baby across
    From me in the terminal
    Won't shut the hell up

  4. dohn121 profile image87
    dohn121posted 7 years ago

    Scarcity of trust
    I believe in her no more
    Autumn winds do blow

  5. Jeffrey Neal profile image86
    Jeffrey Nealposted 7 years ago

    Yesterday was rain
    It was much cooler today
    Fall is really here

  6. Pearldiver profile image86
    Pearldiverposted 7 years ago

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Seasons-of-Haiku

    Blatent promo post
    Ask us today; Who can Haiku?
    Judge if you dare!

    lol

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      Gracious Octoberposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Judge I dare not!
      For my judgement i wish to avoid
      Ummm now i must void

      lol

  7. Sandy Thorn profile image59
    Sandy Thornposted 7 years ago

    sleep hides weary eyes
    winter breaks in tiny shards
    sun paints pink on blue

  8. abcd1111 profile image60
    abcd1111posted 7 years ago

    a modern haiku
    no longer depends upon
    the five seven five

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      Gracious Octoberposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Give thanks abcd1111
      you have taught me something new
      i hope in the future i will learn something
      that i may share with you

      Is that still considered a haiku?

      1. abcd1111 profile image60
        abcd1111posted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Shorter still-
        a written photo
        for mind's eye

        I'm sure you could teach me a great deal!

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    Gracious Octoberposted 7 years ago

    Pearldriver my eyes have
    gazed upon some of your work and
    you write great haiku's

    1. Pearldiver profile image86
      Pearldiverposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      How Gracious October
      Gold within new grains of sand
      On welcome shores.

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        Gracious Octoberposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Pleasantly I receive your welcome
        words invoking sweet solace within complicated realms
        refreshing in these times

  10. abcd1111 profile image60
    abcd1111posted 7 years ago

    silent snow-
    no need to rake
    the yard now

  11. Hmrjmr1 profile image79
    Hmrjmr1posted 7 years ago
 
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