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A Dedication To ALL Women!

  1. Cagsil profile image61
    Cagsilposted 7 years ago

    A Poem Called "Women"

    Women are unpredictable,
    And that make men gullible.
    Women are courted by men,
    Men are rejected usually.
    Men think that they are smarter,
    Yet women are the mind masters.
    Women can be confused one minute,
    And perfectly alright the next.
    Men can not do that,
    Because if they do then they just look stupid.
    Men should be impressed with women,
    Yet many are not.
    Never underestimate a women and her mind,
    Becaue if you do then you will be outwitted.
    A woman's mind matures faster than man,
    Therefore men have already lost.
    No matter how hard a man thinks,
    A woman can take him easily.
    Women make believe they are weaker,
    Physically they may be- but mentally men are no match.
    Regardless of a woman's age,
    A man do not compare.
    Women are superior in a lot of ways,
    Men just refuse to admit it.
    Women use all their tools to get whatever they want,
    And most of the time men give it to them.
    I'm not saying that men can compete with women,
    Because I will destroy most women.
    Smarts and wisdom will be the attack,
    Most women are smart but not wise.
    This is from personal experience,
    And I have met, seen and watched a lot of different women.
    I'm actually impressed with most,
    But most can not be trusted when it comes to our minds.
    The game can be very dangerous,
    Most of the time someone gets hurt - usually the women.
    Do not get me wrong,
    Men are not much better.
    Most men can be useless in a lot of aspects,
    But then again men have their purpose to be here.
    I have nothing against women,
    Some are worth the trouble.
    When the pleasure starts to lose to the pain,
    Get out while you still are able.
    Women can grip a man tighter than he can her,
    Trust me- that would not be a good situation.
    Once you feel that you are no longer equal,
    Either get back to it or run.
    Once you lose that,
    Then you will never gain it again.
    Men are weakest when they open themselves,
    And most women know this fact.
    Any man who says that no women will get the best of him,
    Has already been scorned by a woman.
    He would not have that attitude otherwise,
    Men are not that emotionally stable.
    Battle of the sexes,
    Will be won by the women.
    That is a proven fact,
    Therefore see them as equals and you might survive.
    A woman will never lose,
    There is no limit to their heart and soul.


    This my dedication to all women. I hope you like it.

    1. prettydarkhorse profile image64
      prettydarkhorseposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Hi CAGS it is too long, I like the last line,  I read it all, thanks

      1. Cagsil profile image61
        Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        I'm sure it is too long for some people. But, that's okay. big_smile

    2. h.a.borcich profile image61
      h.a.borcichposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Cags,

        This poem is a compliment to women in my eyes. Most men are more concerned with controlling a woman than knowing who she is. The shift of relationship power seems uncomfortable to insecure guys, so they don't look at the heart of her.
        My husband calls me his ocean...That I can sail ships, and I can also sink them. When still I am vast, and breathtaking when raging. He sees the woman I am, and doesn't flinch.
        Cags words are naked and truthful in this poem.
         Just my humble opinion, Holly

    3. spiderpam profile image48
      spiderpamposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Neat. I liked it.

    4. tantrum profile image60
      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      IS THIS A JOKE, CAGSIL ?

      I didn't like at all!
      a lot of nasty things you say about women in there.

      Very funny,anyway!
      lol lol lol

    5. Stimp profile image74
      Stimpposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you (((hugs))) that was very very nice.

  2. sooner than later profile image56
    sooner than laterposted 7 years ago

    why are you single, thats beautiful. sniff.

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      By choice.

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      Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      *hands sooner a box of tissues* lol

      1. Cagsil profile image61
        Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        lol lol

    3. Jonathan Janco profile image75
      Jonathan Jancoposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Alot of us single men are underappreciated.

      1. Cagsil profile image61
        Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Is there a reason for this post or did you want to make your manly present felt?

        This had nothing to do with you, as a man, or as a person. So, why did you come in here?

        1. Jonathan Janco profile image75
          Jonathan Jancoposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          The title drew me in, then I read the poem. Very nice. Then I got distracted by sooner's comment. Sorry. Been stuck in the life partner debate over in the gender/relationships forum. Plus, my novocain is just starting to wear off so I'm a bit sloppy and unthorough today. Again, a lovely poem.

          1. Cagsil profile image61
            Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            Thank you. Much appreciated.

      2. h.a.borcich profile image61
        h.a.borcichposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Oh, lets just focus on wonderful women for a few minutes :)We really appreciate men who do smile

  3. h.a.borcich profile image61
    h.a.borcichposted 7 years ago

    Very nice Cags smile

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank You H.A.Borcich big_smile

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    I like it, Cagsil...rings truth big_smile

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank You Crazdwriter. big_smile

  5. shazwellyn profile image82
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    Women want to be adored.  You adore us, your dedication shows this.  Thankyou xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  6. Cagsil profile image61
    Cagsilposted 7 years ago

    Thank You Shazwellyn and You're Welcome. big_smile

  7. sooner than later profile image56
    sooner than laterposted 7 years ago

    Can I say something without you getting mad?

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Sure. You can say whatever you want.

      1. sooner than later profile image56
        sooner than laterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        there are some really bizzar statements in there. I wonder, does this peom reflect a past relationship?

        1. Cagsil profile image61
          Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          No, it doesn't. It's thought I had about 'women' in general.

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    Are you going to put this up as a hub by ay chance Cagsil?

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      It already is.

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        Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Oh cool! big_smile must run and hit UP

        1. Cagsil profile image61
          Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this
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            Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            WOW I love the picture you put for the poem too.

            1. Cagsil profile image61
              Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

              Thank You.

  9. shazwellyn profile image82
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    caggie waggie is no scaggie. x

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    Where do you find those? do you just google for them?

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Someone gave me the photo Crazdwriter.

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        Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Oh cool! okay I'll leave you alone now big_smile

        1. Cagsil profile image61
          Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          You're not bothering me. big_smile

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    sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago

    Hell, I've know that for 32yrs and since I've been married for 34yrs I'm just alittle slow. Are you a guy or a girl? Really! I just can't figure you out.

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Why are you so confused about figuring out whether or not I am a guy or girl? I don't get it.

      By all means, if it's necessary to tell you, then so be it.

      I am 100% all Male!

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        sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Sorry. I really wasn't sure. Sometimes you sound alittle feminine to me or over sensitive. It's easier to address someone knowing their background. Thanks.

        1. Cagsil profile image61
          Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Isn't that why you're not suppose to make judgements of people, without first having all the facts? Or, do you just judge on the basis of hatred of all of humanity.

          Last time I checked, HubPages was about people learning from others and a community where people READ other people's Hubs, so they can get to know one another.

          Had you read my Hubs, like many others have, then you would have known, long before now.

          And, if you think for a second, that I'm going to justify myself to you, via answering your little gimmick questions attached to my poem....then you can think again. Your little questions point to the direct reason why WOMEN are better than MEN. But, nice try tho. I'll give you that much credit. Okay?

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            sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            You're way over reading me I'm not near that complex. I'm very simple and assuming I have any motive other than black&white, right&wrong or just having fun you missed. I did figure out why you sound kind of "off", you're from Massachusetts.

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    Justine76posted 7 years ago

    huh. maybe I took it all wrong. That has to be the most backhanded compliment ever....
    Its good, but most of it is hinting that women are devious, conniving, cunning,weak and unwise...yet should be adored?
    but I probably misunderstood..

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      That's okay Justine. Many women took it like you do, but my intention was to point out WOMEN are better than men, because they are able to adapt more quickly and use their intelligence(like I said in another forum) to bettering themselves, instead of inflating their own self-esteem or ego, per se.

      Please don't take as an insult, it wasn't meant in that manner.

      1. DogSiDaed profile image61
        DogSiDaedposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        I don't agree tongue When comparing people it is bad to use gender, unless it is a very gender specific issue. I never understood why men and women have to be so subdivided and stereotyped. We are all people, we all think in our own way, and there are women with big egos, just as there are men without them. It's always best to be individual smile

        1. Cagsil profile image61
          Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          I'm sure you don't agree and you have that right. But, what you don't have a right to do is tell me that I don't realize that women have big ego's. Yes, there are SOME women who have big ego, but what you fail to realize is that those who do have big egos are the one who live in a MAN's world in business. Those who don't, don't have big egos.

          So, let's keep it real. As for dividing people....we are different sexes. Therefore there are differences and each person handles things differently, however, with that said- most women handle all situations, better than men.

          Thank you for your input. It was somewhat helpful in pointing out your own weakness as a person and your lack of understanding of women in general.

          1. DogSiDaed profile image61
            DogSiDaedposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            Cagsil, not only was that last comment ignorant and snobbish, it has shown a complete bypassing of logic. It seems strange that somebody who claims to be advocating ways to a free mind is so close minded himself?

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        Justine76posted 7 years ago in reply to this

        oh cagsil.......I know. You have a funny way sometimes is all. I know you mean a compliment and even if you didnt I dont offend easily. smile
        I love that you wanted to show your respect.

    2. Rangerwife profile image54
      Rangerwifeposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I'm with you.  In all that it built women up, it also tore them down.  It's a little too sexist and arrogant for my taste or like.

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    Poppa Bluesposted 7 years ago

    I don't think it's right to generalize. We all have our strengths and weaknesses, and we're certainly all different, but as a group women and men do have something in common, we're both human and on any given day our strengths and weaknesses can be exploited if one is so inclined. Perhaps it's best to consider our relationships not as a contest with a winner or a loser, but as a compliment, a union, like iron we are malleable but when carbon is added we are strong like steel.

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank You. But, as with most MEN, you obvious don't think highly of women. But, I appreciate you stopping by.

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        Poppa Bluesposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Oh? It's obvious? How so? I think you're "dedication" shows that it is actually you that doesn't think highly of women.
        A sampling of what I believe some women might take offense... Am I wrong ladies?

        Women can be confused one minute,
        And perfectly alright the next.
        Men can not do that,

        Women make believe they are weaker,

        Women use all their tools to get whatever they want,
        And most of the time men give it to them.

        I'm not saying that men can compete with women,
        Because I will destroy most women.
        Smarts and wisdom will be the attack,
        Most women are smart but not wise.
        This is from personal experience,

        And I have met, seen and watched a lot of different women.
        I'm actually impressed with most,
        But most can not be trusted when it comes to our minds

        I have nothing against women,
        Some are worth the trouble.
        When the pleasure starts to lose to the pain,

        1. Cagsil profile image61
          Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Boy is your vision or perception way off base. lol lol lol

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            Poppa Bluesposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            Apparently I'm not the only one that thought some of what you wrote was insulting to women, nor am I the only one whose perception is "off".

  14. shazwellyn profile image82
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    Believe me .. he is ALL MAN!  You should read him when the testostrogen kicks in! Wahooooooie! x

    1. Cagsil profile image61
      Cagsilposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      lol lol lol Thank You Shazwellyn. lol lol lol

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      sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thats fine I just can't figure out where hes coming from sometimes. Hes probably very liberal and that can be confusing.

  15. sooner than later profile image56
    sooner than laterposted 7 years ago

    A Poem Called "Women"

    Women are unpredictable, - got that right
    And that make men gullible. - I'll bite
    Women are courted by men, - Courted? thats a word for it
    Men are rejected usually. - not me
    Men think that they are smarter, - some do
    Yet women are the mind masters. - like strings attached?
    Women can be confused one minute, - word
    And perfectly alright the next. - amen
    Men can not do that, - thank God
    Because if they do then they just look stupid. - indeed
    Men should be impressed with women, - I like em
    Yet many are not. - WHAT, tell me more
    Never underestimate a women and her mind,- Ok
    Becaue if you do then you will be outwitted. - every time
    A woman's mind matures faster than man,- thats wierd
    Therefore men have already lost. - lost what?
    No matter how hard a man thinks, yes? 
    A woman can take him easily.- ohh I love when they 'take' me
    Women make believe they are weaker, - i did not know that
    Physically they may be- but mentally men are no match.-OH?-
    Regardless of a woman's age,-don't talk about their age!!!
    A man do not compare. - 'does' not compare
    Women are superior in a lot of ways,- go on
    Men just refuse to admit it.- dang it
    Women use all their tools to get whatever they want,-tits?
    And most of the time men give it to them.-if its tits, yes
    I'm not saying that men can compete with women,-I noticed
    Because I will destroy most women.- What? explain destroy
    Smarts and wisdom will be the attack,- oh dear
    Most women are smart but not wise.- is that a compliment?
    This is from personal experience,-thats deep man
    And I have met, seen and watched a lot of different women.-I hope not through windows, that would be peeping. 
    I'm actually impressed with most,- they meet your standard?
    But most can not be trusted when it comes to our minds.-oh
    The game can be very dangerous,- for sure, for sure
    Most of the time someone gets hurt - usually the women.-oh?
    Do not get me wrong,-I think I did 28 lines ago. 
    Men are not much better.- I'll bite again, but explain much
    Most men can be useless in a lot of aspects,-couch potatos
    But then again men have their purpose to be here.-breeding
    I have nothing against women,-thats good, i hope its mutual
    Some are worth the trouble.-eh, explain trouble? 
    When the pleasure starts to lose to the pain,-what? 
    Get out while you still are able.-I like my wife though
    Women can grip a man tighter than he can her,-I love that 
    Trust me- that would not be a good situation.-ohh, i don't
    Once you feel that you are no longer equal,- ouch
    Either get back to it or run.-are we talking about sex? 
    Once you lose that,- yes- go on
    Then you will never gain it again.- wow
    Men are weakest when they open themselves,- true true
    And most women know this fact.- dang it.
    Any man who says that no women will get the best of him,-yes?
    Has already been scorned by a woman.-scorned? ouch
    He would not have that attitude otherwise,-who is he? 
    Men are not that emotionally stable.- fwat? 
    Battle of the sexes,-love that show
    Will be won by the women.-I did not know that
    That is a proven fact,-ohh, show me
    Therefore see them as equals and you might survive.-ok
    A woman will never lose,- Never
    There is no limit to their heart and soul.- I'll buy that

    1. chambersgirl21 profile image56
      chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      This is not something that I would normaly get involved with but Sooners' break down of the poem is pretty funny.

      Cag. I can't relate to the peom- and I can tell you poured your heart into it by the posts in response. But I like others find some of the comments offensive; even when you were trying to be nice. We(women) are complex and maybe hard to understand, but you did not hit the nail on the head here. I would explain in detail if you would want to learn something.

    2. chambersgirl21 profile image56
      chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      bump. *snicker*

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    lmao sooner!

  17. h.a.borcich profile image61
    h.a.borcichposted 7 years ago

    Good Grief - Sooner...Did you just "disect" a hub publicly?

    Please tell me it isn't true. Holly

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    lyricsingrayposted 7 years ago

    beautifully written. Poetic bliss. Thanks

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    sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago

    Thats how liberals think, they think they are worldly and see what the real world is. They really only fool themselves and if they're lucky they will grow out of it, I did.

    1. DogSiDaed profile image61
      DogSiDaedposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Yeah, I don't think it's really possible to get a world view you can force upon people, everyone needs to learn to get through things their way really. I mean advice is always nice, but flat out RULES are, to me at least, intolerable.

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        sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        I agree, humans have to make their own mistakes to learn. I'm not trying to change this thread but, women are awsome! Their service to mankind is unsurpassed and they deserve all the love they can handle.

        1. DogSiDaed profile image61
          DogSiDaedposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          I'm not mad tongue And I would agree most women do very little but good, but like all people, no-one is infallible. I don't really disagree with what everyone is saying, I'm just not fond of stereotyping smile

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            sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            I know I do that, I just like to stirr the pot. I married a woman 34yrs ago and she has taught me through example how to be a better person. Please, don't take me seriously.

        2. AdsenseStrategies profile image68
          AdsenseStrategiesposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          I thought this post was about women? Surely there's not someone down there south of (our) border (up here) calling someone a liberal for his opinion on *this*???!!!! Hehehehehehehehe -- when will it ever end.. thank God we get US TV channels in Canada, the entertainment never ends big_smile

  20. AdsenseStrategies profile image68
    AdsenseStrategiesposted 7 years ago

    How about women are just complicated.. go figure, so are men, so are gorillas - complex species are complicated

    1. DogSiDaed profile image61
      DogSiDaedposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      You speak some sense! smile

      1. AdsenseStrategies profile image68
        AdsenseStrategiesposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        I think I am going to go through all the threads on Hubpages and write: Look folks, it's complicated; stop pretending complicated issues are simple, when they're not. What do you think?

        1. DogSiDaed profile image61
          DogSiDaedposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Absolutely true, a lot of people try and condense life down into a box and look at it through rose tinted spectacles. I always think life is more magnificent if you try and view it from as wide an angle as possible. I mean, I write poetry and I enjoy seeing the beauty in the same things, but at the same time, I study science and get that view as well, and it's ridiculous how complicated one seemingly simple organism can be, let alone EVERYTHING.

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          AdsenseStrategiesposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          ...or will that make me a liberal? heheheheeheehohohohohhahahahaha oh.. my sides...

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    sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago

    Are you mad now?

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    sneakorocksolidposted 7 years ago

    You are mad aren't you?

    1. DogSiDaed profile image61
      DogSiDaedposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Don't worry, I don't ever really get mad at anything smile

  23. h.a.borcich profile image61
    h.a.borcichposted 7 years ago

    A fellow hubber shared his writing. Some liked it, and some did not. So why does it need to become a "rip the writer" session?

    Not everyone will like every writing even from their favorite hubbers. Would you ever consider the author to be sensitive to the silence? If you are really offended, how about a discreet message to them?

    Even a line by line disection of someones work on the forum? Was your well being dependent upon tearing down a fellow hubber like that?

    Washing my hands now.

    1. DogSiDaed profile image61
      DogSiDaedposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      If this refers to me amongst others, which I'm sure it does, I was not 'ripping' the writer, I simply expressed another viewpoint. Once challenged by said writer I then did exhibit a more aggressive response true, but a defensive one. As much as I feel an urge to defend my views, I do agree continuing on for such a long time is annoying for others and therefore myself, at the same time as debating my point, I don't like causing too much friction, so perhaps I shall leave things here, ta smile

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      Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I'm with you on this one h.a.

      1. tantrum profile image60
        tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        If a poem is dedicated to all women as the OP says, I presume it's going to be a compliment on womanhood, not what's written on this poem.
        Some lines are very rude.
        Maybe you didn't read it thoroughly or you didn't pay attention.

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          Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          No Tantrum I read it all the way through and I did pay attention. I just don't let things get to me nor did I see most of it as rude. I know what I am and that I am a tough woman that men can't understand and I accept it...I am who I am and I liked the poem.

          1. tantrum profile image60
            tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            I didn't.
            Anyway I thought it was funny as I stated earlier.
            A joke! lol

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              Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

              lol yea I did laugh about some of it, especially the parts where he was talking about men lol

  24. chambersgirl21 profile image56
    chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago

    Cagsil, where did you go?

  25. chambersgirl21 profile image56
    chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago

    Tantrum,

    why are you so gentle? You must be a nurturing mother of 12. wink

    1. tantrum profile image60
      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      How did you guess ?? yikes

      1. chambersgirl21 profile image56
        chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago in reply to this

        you just eluminate a huggable personality. big_smile did you read line by line Sooner's breakdown. I almost peed.

        1. tantrum profile image60
          tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          You're kidding, right ? About the 'huggable' personality lol
          lol lol

          Didn't you notice my posts in religion ? big_smile lol

          Yes. I read sooner's. Very good indeed ! It made laugh a lot more than cag's original ! lol

          1. chambersgirl21 profile image56
            chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago in reply to this

            I was kidding. But actually you have moments of compassion and sincerity. And that is like a cherry tree in blossom

            1. tantrum profile image60
              tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

              Well, if you're sincere, thank you very much ,indeed !! smile

              1. chambersgirl21 profile image56
                chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago in reply to this

                I was. Can I see it more often?

                1. tantrum profile image60
                  tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

                  I don't think so ! lol

                  1. chambersgirl21 profile image56
                    chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago in reply to this

                    haha, then I will enjoy the phenominon in its rare form.

                    back to Cagsil, did you learn about yourself? I did.

  26. Beth100 profile image83
    Beth100posted 7 years ago

    Aw gosh, Cags, thanks. You never cease to amaze me.

    BUMP  lol  smile big_smile lol

  27. Daniel Carter profile image90
    Daniel Carterposted 7 years ago

    I watched a child pluck a wildflower. The root came up with the stem. There was still a lot of dirt on the root. The child ran over to her mother, dressed in a beautiful spring dress and sort of "shoved" it into her clean dress as a 3 year-old would normally do. The mother became upset because her beautiful dress was soiled. The child cried.

    Delivery was clumsy and awkward. It would have been better if an adult had handed her a rose, but I think even still that she would have complained that her finger was pricked by a thorn when she reached to take it.

    Some people, it seems, just have to have their gifts a certain way, or they don't seem to count. That's really sad, since the thought was really so genuine.

    Maybe phraseology, etc., in Cag's poem seems a bit "offish" for some, but I think his intent was pretty clear from the get-go. Nothing wrong with that. Dissecting it seems a little harsh to me.

    Just my thoughts.

  28. chambersgirl21 profile image56
    chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago

    "I have nothing against women,
    Some are worth the trouble"

    I'm glad my husband thought I was worth the trouble.

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    AuthorLMSposted 7 years ago

    That was simply amazing, I loved reading it! Thank you so much for sharing. I greatly enjoyed it.

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      chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I was amazed and did enjoy reading it too. like reading "the far side".

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    lyricsingrayposted 7 years ago

    Cagsil, regardless of it's delivery, the intent was pure I certainly believe, as much as I can know you.  So thank you for the gesture and who knows maybe get some or lots of female fans all the while.  xo

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      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Of course I Agree smile
      He's been naughty and wild. A lot of women love that ! big_smile
      And where is he ? yikes
      Hey Cagsil, come back here ! lol

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    caravalhophotoposted 7 years ago

    Cagsil...

    That was a beautifully written poem...I do not think that it was offensive to women and it speaks a lot of truth...great poem, love it.

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    chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago

    yes, i liked it. Will you write a poem about men?

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      R.G. San Ramonposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      smile Can we appreciate women without disvaluing men?

      * Is disvaluing a word? Hubpages underlined it with red. big_smile

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    chambersgirl21posted 7 years ago

    It would only be fair.

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      R.G. San Ramonposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Indeed. I was pointing at cagsil's poem.

 
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