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poem

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    jon88posted 7 years ago

    Three AM, insomnia,
    wide-awake since eleven.
    I shake her gently,
    softly speaking in her ear,
    putting my hand on her rear.
    Can you help me, darling?
    My body is aching,
    my mind is wandering,
    but I don’t believe in taking pills.
    Can you give me a sleeping thrill

    1. prettydarkhorse profile image63
      prettydarkhorseposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      hmmmm, what happened next, did she say, cmon just DIY, my dear, I am too sleepy...and i dont believe in sleeping thrill, just sleeping still...

    2. zzron profile image59
      zzronposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I think it sounds ok, it rhymes, its not dirty.

      1. zzron profile image59
        zzronposted 7 years ago in reply to this



        If you think thats dirty, then better not look at mine, you might blush, and I'm a christian. LOL.

  2. shazwellyn profile image81
    shazwellynposted 7 years ago

    I guess this is a quick night timer eh? *wink*

  3. Maddie Ruud profile image79
    Maddie Ruudposted 7 years ago

    Please do not post adult poetry here.  I have already had to remove one.  Also, you should publish your poems as hubs, not in the forums.

    1. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Is that adult poetry for you ?? yikes

      Very subtle I think it is,and in no way offensive.

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        mistrunnerposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        well it does contain adult content and it should be posted for comment as a hub

 
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