Last Breathe

  1. tmusehere profile image61
    tmusehereposted 6 years ago

    History forms in tears
    Or disaster in tears
    Let your beliefs burn
    Let your dreams burn
    Your song will come out from the ashes
    May be History will be
    The Last Breathe.

    1. DogSiDaed profile image60
      DogSiDaedposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Very good, but I think it should be breath not breathe, and maybe is one word I think in this case smile