poem title -- feedback please!

  1. maguijo profile image59
    maguijoposted 6 years ago

    I have written a poem (long time ago actually) that I will publish here on Hubpages, but I don't have a good title. The poem is essentially a shopping list, that a wife wrote to her husband, and is very foreplay-ish.

    The title "Mrs. Schindler's List" is stuck in my head...but I don't think that's a good idea. I need something like that though... any ideas?

  2. bojanglesk8 profile image60
    bojanglesk8posted 6 years ago

    Your title sounds good enough.

    1. maguijo profile image59
      maguijoposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      I don't know... it might be copyright infringement and I'm also worried that the subject matter of the movie "Schindler's List" is so sensitive, people might think I'm rude and insensitive...especially since my poem is of a sexy nature, and not serious.

 
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