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The whispers

  1. VampireAlice profile image61
    VampireAliceposted 7 years ago

    The whispers come and go but never seem to vanish.
    The whispers come and go but never seem to sound.
    The whispers are all around me, I cant make them stop.
    the whispers control my thoughs, my moves , my being.
    the whispers have stopped for the night only to begin again
    in the morniing at dawn.



    It never ends for me

    1. VampireAlice profile image61
      VampireAliceposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      its a poem of mine i just wanted to get my work out.
      but,  thanks for the comments

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      cosetteposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      cool. assuming the persona is a great technique. i did that with my bunny when he "wrote" stuff on Hubpages once upon a time...welcome aboard Alice! smile

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        VampireAliceposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you so much

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    zampanoposted 7 years ago

    er... might be the wind or just a draught...
    Inspect your windows and other openings and eventually, seal them better.
    If you have an air conditioning device, you sure found your whisperer.

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    lyricsingrayposted 7 years ago

    ya...um...maybe more air, better ventilation

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    zampanoposted 7 years ago

    Ah... Do they speak (whisper) in thongs ?

    1. VampireAlice profile image61
      VampireAliceposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Its just a poem of mine dont take this seriously,
      although i take my writhing very seriously.
      I become the person.

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    zampanoposted 7 years ago

    And it would be indeed a nice start (or end) for a fiction suspense novel.

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    repost it as a hub VampireAlice...then you can get your work out there more smile
    welcome to hubpages

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      lyricsingrayposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      good advice. and welcome big_smile

    2. VampireAlice profile image61
      VampireAliceposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      thanks smile

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        VampireAliceposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        i have posted my first hub i will post more

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          Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          woohoo it always feels good when you post your first one. but wait until you hit 50 and then 100...phew it's a rush big_smile

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      Justine76posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      ditto  smile   forums fade away. hubs last.

  7. donna bamford profile image60
    donna bamfordposted 7 years ago

    I like this.  I think I sort of know what you mean.  i have
    something similar but I am not sure it is what you are talking about.  Nicely written.  I shall readd more.

    1. VampireAlice profile image61
      VampireAliceposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      thanks your all awesome thanks for reading there are more on my page

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    Mrsincadosposted 7 years ago

    Rather interesting, it's always nice to discover something new.

  9. dyonder profile image78
    dyonderposted 7 years ago

    really like this, thanx 4 sharin

  10. donotfear profile image91
    donotfearposted 7 years ago

    Based on my observation this sounds like auditory hallucinations, which are okay, as long as they aren't giving commands.

    Over analyzing again. Where's the Prozac?

 
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