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    SLDposted 7 years ago

    My flow is breathin.
    Heartbeat thumpin.
    I'm Frankenstein and this is my monster.
    Only difference is I'm the murderer here.
    Chase you til the ends of the earth with my words.
    Have no fear, bow to the master.
    King of the Clowns,
    worthless really
    Silly is the idea that you could compare,
    to the talent of originality
    Mentalityto be me,
    nothing refined here,
    to find here,
    just a grind here.
    Chillin in the crib,
    Choking down the green
    if you know what I mean.
    Floating on the clouds
    can't bring me down.
    Spaceman cruisin to Mars.
    Boozin at the bars,
    can't slow down
    I don't know how,
    didn't come with brakes
    maybe I should be recalled.
    But I'm gonna beat this drum til the day that I die.
    It's the only way I know how,
    don't even know why.
    Dead man walking,
    free man joggin,
    wanted man runnin.
    So I gotta be the fastest,
    can't pass this,
    you know I cash this.

  2. pooja0908 profile image63
    pooja0908posted 7 years ago

    Title should be

    Find Your Aim

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      SLDposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      ? Why

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        pooja0908posted 7 years ago in reply to this

        for what you have witten.
        your poem have so many things
        you have covered various part
        so i thought readers have to find lines related to him.
        All will find their aim by the line match with their life.

        That is why

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          SLDposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          I like that, thanks for the feedback.

          1. pooja0908 profile image63
            pooja0908posted 7 years ago in reply to this

            Welcome

 
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