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  1. freddykrueger profile image60
    freddykruegerposted 6 years ago

    your first steps taken only a week ago/now it seems you leaving me on the cold / no longer a daddy now just a witness/try to say hi but to busy for daddy dearest/growing up so quickly no time for me / you got mommy you'll ne ok daddy/i got a job,school,and a new boyfriend/what?yes daddy remember he used to be my friend/what? he so good to me im thinking of a wedding/what?and no daddy im not playing/my lil' girl is no more it was only yesterday you were born/not you grown and my heart is torn/my baby is gone from eyesight not needing me/ off with a devilboy building a family/

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    Crazdwriterposted 6 years ago

    Welcome to hubpages but a bit advice. stop posting so many forums and write hubs.

    1. tobey100 profile image60
      tobey100posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      smile Yep!

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    Denno66posted 6 years ago

    I agree. The Forums are fun, but writing Hubs attracts a wider audience.

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    Pani Midnyte Odinposted 6 years ago

    Although I've enjoyed reading your poems here on the forums, the forums are more for discussion and you really should write some more hubs. This will help you attract followers.