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Ok Hubbers, lets write a poem together.

  1. Sherbet Penny profile image75
    Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago

    Now poets and non poets, fellow hubbers, lets write a 40 line poem together, a hubbers in unity poem, and at the 40 line mark, I'll gather up all the lines and make a hubbers poetry hub out of them. This could be fun and hilarious with the end product.

    So whoever is up for it, write just one line, I don't care what its about, or how long(not too long though now be good) on any topic, emotion etc. Try not to read anybody else's so you won't be influenced, and when we have 40 lines, I'll knock them up together and see what we got, poetry straight from the hubbers mouths, or laptops in this case. I'll give the First line, then were off, hopefully lol. Goog-luck people.

    LINE 1.

    The sun beams through the window and I sweat like a wild beast, typing with my broken fingers.

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      StormRyderposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      And as the words flow from my mind, the thought of you still lingers..

      1. Mentalist acer profile image60
        Mentalist acerposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        With an unbroken train of thought,telling myself that
        even grey has color.
        The neural connections in my mind becomeing
        a metallic treble.

      2. MordechaiZoltan profile image73
        MordechaiZoltanposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        thinking to myself, if only I could type with my toes the pain would not be so bittersweet

        1. nikepick99 profile image61
          nikepick99posted 6 years ago in reply to this

          Deleted

          1. BIGCSSHOP profile image83
            BIGCSSHOPposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            The right side of the coin flips for me every time, whether it's yours or mine.

          2. mailxpress profile image78
            mailxpressposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            backward steps makes me move forward

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          Poppa Bluesposted 6 years ago

          Trying to untangle the thoughts and emotions captive in my heart

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            Pani Midnyte Odinposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            Wondering why we ever had to part...

            1. Freya Cesare profile image75
              Freya Cesareposted 6 years ago in reply to this

              wondering why we ever had to meet

        3. keiz profile image60
          keizposted 6 years ago

          Dreams of you constantly haunt me and I can only type in a trance

          1. Freya Cesare profile image75
            Freya Cesareposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            The world turning upside and down but I still standing inside the same pain

            1. blondepoet profile image79
              blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

              As my soul does weep within the morning rain.

              1. rebekahELLE profile image91
                rebekahELLEposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                watering the earth as it cleanses my pain.



                [office isn't open yet in CA]

        4. Ohma profile image79
          Ohmaposted 6 years ago

          My mind is reeling thinking of our lost romance.

        5. LeonJane profile image88
          LeonJaneposted 6 years ago

          as I remember a time when your hands were in mine

          1. LeighGBanks profile image60
            LeighGBanksposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            the rain makes such a gentle sound as now i live six feet underground

            1. roy d profile image61
              roy dposted 6 years ago in reply to this

              Blood, sweat and tears from years gone by. Battles fought, spirit unknown.
              Fear misconceived, shattering dreams and schemes not yet known, and we cry, and wonder why, yet we continue to seek a path that will lead us from this life we live and the pain within. Little did I know that we need not search for what we seek, but choose instead the road less traveled that holds all the mysteries unraveled.

              By me; Royd

              1. Sherbet Penny profile image75
                Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                Hey Royd, the whole idea here is just one line please.

                1. roy d profile image61
                  roy dposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                  Got ya, delete it please.

                  1. roy d profile image61
                    roy dposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    I over read your instructions of just one line. My bag.

                    1. roy d profile image61
                      roy dposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                      Fears misconceived, shattering dreams and schemes not yet known.

                    2. Sherbet Penny profile image75
                      Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                      No problem Royd, this will be fun when put together, if we reach 40 lines, hopefully

        6. theirishobserver. profile image60
          theirishobserver.posted 6 years ago

          Gentle curse of love stroked my heart smile

          1. rebekahELLE profile image91
            rebekahELLEposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            cupid's arrow piercing the deepest part

        7. russiangypsygirl profile image82
          russiangypsygirlposted 6 years ago

          Nothing stops me from falling, impaling my body on the blinding shards of your absence.

        8. blondepoet profile image79
          blondepoetposted 6 years ago

          Oh heck with the last few posts am unsure where to continue from.

          1. Sherbet Penny profile image75
            Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            Blondepoet, your not meant to continue, just throw in a line, I'm gona put them all together and see how messed up it is, for good oul fun.

            1. blondepoet profile image79
              blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

              K Sherbs I am going to let it flow through smile

              1. Sherbet Penny profile image75
                Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                yaaaaaayy my favourite blonde

                1. blondepoet profile image79
                  blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                  My cutest cyber space hunk. smile

          2. LeonJane profile image88
            LeonJaneposted 6 years ago in reply to this

            {I agree blondepoet, some of these lines are really off on another tangent! I guess Sherbet Penny will have to do some discretionary editing to make this poem flow}

            1. Sherbet Penny profile image75
              Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

              Yes it'll be a bit of work, fun though, the stranger the better

        9. mikelong profile image82
          mikelongposted 6 years ago

          So many voices, and all so scattered; the medication is failing


          (my line for submission...not to be confused with a criticism)

        10. QuirkyPearl profile image61
          QuirkyPearlposted 6 years ago

          my red heart balloon is trapped up a tree

        11. HubblyBubbly profile image75
          HubblyBubblyposted 6 years ago

          Come the high  wind and set my soul free

        12. blondepoet profile image79
          blondepoetposted 6 years ago

          Lust ridden thoughts consume my mind,

        13. calpol25 profile image76
          calpol25posted 6 years ago

          What my heart desires im sure to find

        14. blondepoet profile image79
          blondepoetposted 6 years ago

          A fire burns deeply within my soul,

        15. calpol25 profile image76
          calpol25posted 6 years ago

          I help it burn with my shovel of coal

          1. calpol25 profile image76
            calpol25posted 6 years ago

            I sit all alone in the park on the grass.

            1. blondepoet profile image79
              blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

              As I pulled a prickle fair clean from my ass.

          2. AEvans profile image70
            AEvansposted 6 years ago

            I look to the sky and asked myself why,

          3. Moneylady profile image78
            Moneyladyposted 6 years ago

            Some dreams are so close and then they die

          4. blondepoet profile image79
            blondepoetposted 6 years ago

            A solitary tear escapes from my eye,

          5. calpol25 profile image76
            calpol25posted 6 years ago

            upon this day I hear do vow

            1. blondepoet profile image79
              blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

              To dump my lover for Bessie the cow.

          6. calpol25 profile image76
            calpol25posted 6 years ago

            I will get new glasses and becareful were i sit

            1. calpol25 profile image76
              calpol25posted 6 years ago

              because crying hurts more than my prickly bit.

              1. AEvans profile image70
                AEvansposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                OMG, Now that is hilarious!!!! lololollo big_smile

            2. blondepoet profile image79
              blondepoetposted 6 years ago

              I rip the blouse from my chest,

              1. calpol25 profile image76
                calpol25posted 6 years ago in reply to this

                and then i reveal my lovely third breast

              2. calpol25 profile image76
                calpol25posted 6 years ago

                I take off my wig and shrug my big shoulders

                1. blondepoet profile image79
                  blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                  Naked and beastly, my heart'eth does smoulder.

              3. calpol25 profile image76
                calpol25posted 6 years ago

                I hang up my drawers and expose my small boulder

              4. calpol25 profile image76
                calpol25posted 6 years ago

                I know theres a problem as im getting older

              5. blondepoet profile image79
                blondepoetposted 6 years ago

                I slip into the water to quench my desire,

                1. calpol25 profile image76
                  calpol25posted 6 years ago

                  and then i get out and go off to retire.

                2. calpol25 profile image76
                  calpol25posted 6 years ago

                  could this be simple or could this be sad, does this make me rude or just simply bad

                  1. blondepoet profile image79
                    blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    I think your just a horny lad.

                    1. calpol25 profile image76
                      calpol25posted 6 years ago in reply to this

                      Then definately im really bad

                3. calpol25 profile image76
                  calpol25posted 6 years ago

                  I can not believe that im a high flyer

                  1. calpol25 profile image76
                    calpol25posted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    as i sit there before your logs on the fire

                4. blondepoet profile image79
                  blondepoetposted 6 years ago

                  As the fire dances upon my skin,
                  I close my eyes and release my sin.

                  1. calpol25 profile image76
                    calpol25posted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    I stand up and stare at the mirror so free
                    I do my big dance that was expected of me.

                5. tantrum profile image61
                  tantrumposted 6 years ago

                  lol

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                  poetlorraineposted 6 years ago

                  Seasons changing, love in the air, carried only by a soft gentle breeze

                  1. calpol25 profile image76
                    calpol25posted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    How the blowing pollen does make me sneeze

                  2. blondepoet profile image79
                    blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    My heart travels across the stormy seas.

                7. calpol25 profile image76
                  calpol25posted 6 years ago

                  We really are naughty this poem gets worse
                  Would you dare us to give it a second verse.

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                  poetlorraineposted 6 years ago

                  as the smile on your face, brings me down to my knees

                  1. calpol25 profile image76
                    calpol25posted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    My feet do give way and I fall 90 degrees

                    1. tantrum profile image61
                      tantrumposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                      lol lol lol

                      this is funny !

                9. calpol25 profile image76
                  calpol25posted 6 years ago

                  This is such a story to tell one an other

                10. calpol25 profile image76
                  calpol25posted 6 years ago

                  dont tell your husband or even your mother.

                  1. AEvans profile image70
                    AEvansposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    Oh dear! lololo big_smile

                11. tantrum profile image61
                  tantrumposted 6 years ago

                  don't tell your sister, your shrink or your lover

                  1. blondepoet profile image79
                    blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    Or they will say to you "Why should I bother?".

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                      china manposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                      Ha !!  bother and lover don't rhyme !  even though you got in ahead of me that time !

                      1. blondepoet profile image79
                        blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        @#####*@@@!!!!! Cal threw me off track,
                        With his three bazookas and a thorn in his crack.

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                    china manposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                    But come back soon and give me another

                  3. calpol25 profile image76
                    calpol25posted 6 years ago

                    tantrum is loving our funny poem

                    please keep your laughter and support flowing

                    1. tantrum profile image61
                      tantrumposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                      Sure !! big_smile

                    2. blondepoet profile image79
                      blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                      As to where this is going I aint really knowing.

                  4. russiangypsygirl profile image82
                    russiangypsygirlposted 6 years ago

                    Hah, guess I misunderstood, SP. I thought they were meant to go together so I just jumped off a point from your 'Wild Beast' which was awesome. Lol. Ok, so here's a completely random line and you can delete my other submission that was led by other hubbers into a very dark place. smile

                    1. Sherbet Penny profile image75
                      Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                      nah ye were on the right track these kids here have gone completly of the track

                      1. russiangypsygirl profile image82
                        russiangypsygirlposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        Alright. We'll let the crazy kids have their fun... I think you should try this experiment again. Only make certain to emphasize at the beginning that no one is to read the other lines until you have composed a poem from them. THAT, my lad, would be funny!!

                        1. blondepoet profile image79
                          blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                          I am sorry Sherbet I tried to keep it on the straight and narrow...

                    2. calpol25 profile image76
                      calpol25posted 6 years ago

                      Oh aint awful it such a disgrace

                      1. blondepoet profile image79
                        blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        That I have such an angelic face.

                      2. ladyjane1 profile image86
                        ladyjane1posted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        my line came in perfectly after yours lol

                    3. ladyjane1 profile image86
                      ladyjane1posted 6 years ago

                      there is a fine line between love and hate

                    4. calpol25 profile image76
                      calpol25posted 6 years ago

                      its naughty but nice and in a dark place

                      1. blondepoet profile image79
                        blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        What's your blow up doll doing in this nice place?

                      2. tantrum profile image61
                        tantrumposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        I wrap up my body with latex and lace

                    5. russiangypsygirl profile image82
                      russiangypsygirlposted 6 years ago

                      Alright. We'll let the crazy kids have their fun... I think you should try this experiment again. Only totally emphasize at the beginning that no one is to read the other lines until you have composed a poem from them. THAT, my lad, would be funny!!

                      1. Sherbet Penny profile image75
                        Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        it was an experiment that went terribly wrong lol

                        1. russiangypsygirl profile image82
                          russiangypsygirlposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                          I would agree... Lol! It was such a fantastic idea. But, yes, terribly wrong..smile

                        2. tantrum profile image61
                          tantrumposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                          I think it went terribly right !

                          1. Sherbet Penny profile image75
                            Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                            haha for some mabe lol

                            1. tantrum profile image61
                              tantrumposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                              lol
                              for me it's perfect. It made me laugh !

                    6. calpol25 profile image76
                      calpol25posted 6 years ago

                      I dare not go further its shameful to place

                    7. ladyjane1 profile image86
                      ladyjane1posted 6 years ago

                      I think we're gonna need a bigger boat

                      1. blondepoet profile image79
                        blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        To keep my bitter sweet thoughts afloat.

                    8. Laura du Toit profile image91
                      Laura du Toitposted 6 years ago

                      so i just drift back to places long gone remembering faces and the words of our song

                      1. blondepoet profile image79
                        blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        To keep my failing heart so strong.

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                      RoseColonposted 6 years ago

                      as we imagine the soft silky touch that reminds us be at ease

                      1. Isabelle22 profile image60
                        Isabelle22posted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        The wind blows the raft through stormy black seas
                        (funniest best thread I have read, tks smile )

                    10. AEvans profile image70
                      AEvansposted 6 years ago

                      I came back and it certainly made me smile and laugh , hehehehheeh big_smile

                    11. blondepoet profile image79
                      blondepoetposted 6 years ago

                      http://i611.photobucket.com/albums/tt191/omicrontheta1/Comments/wonder_lick_Roses.jpg
                      Sherby for you sad sad
                      Your thread is still going strong.

                      1. Sherbet Penny profile image75
                        Sherbet Pennyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                        BP, where would I be with out you haha thank you, I'm blushing

                        1. Nikkij504gurl profile image79
                          Nikkij504gurlposted 6 years ago in reply to this

                          yea this is funny. hi im new (:

                     
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