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FUTURE CHANGES

  1. you suggest one profile image59
    you suggest oneposted 7 years ago

    I stumble in fear
    Of the prince of darkness,
    The light is fading
    Only gloom remains,
    Answers are searched for
    Remedies craved,
    If only the cure could come
    From the ones who were saved.

    Remainders
    Reminders of a love from the past
    A shoulder to cry on?
    Good things never last.

    Changes,future to rely on
    Forget the dead
    Let bygones be bygone,
    Tomorrow will come
    This is something to cherish,
    Will we all accept what is offered
    Of the life that was given to perish?

    Remainders
    Reminders of a love from the past
    A shoulder to cry on?
    Good things never last.

    Tony Martin 17-03-1994

    1. Beata Stasak profile image82
      Beata Stasakposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Happiness grows from desperation, are you not the most happy when you feel like to cry?
      Time is changing however it is still the same...grandparents die to make space for grandchildren to live on and so on...

      All the best Tony with your writing...Beata in a hat

      1. you suggest one profile image59
        you suggest oneposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Today I put on a hat,not THE hat,just a hat to keep the sun off my head whilst tending my garden,THE hat is saved for special occasions,to cry is mostly to release sorrow,to cry through joy is surely a wondrous feeling,tears of happiness, tears of sorrow,tears of rage maybe tomorrow.
                                 Take care Beata,
        P.S. do you teach in a hat,sometimes a good hat can increase the feeling of confidence,which I am sure you have plenty of........ TONY off to bed,not in a hat.

    2. agaglia profile image84
      agagliaposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Nice poem.  Keep it up.

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    mailme.lagarposted 6 years ago

    fine write...

 
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