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Insanity

  1. SARAHQUILL78 profile image60
    SARAHQUILL78posted 7 years ago

    Insanity

    This isn't what I planned it to be

    slipping on the slick surfaces of insanity

    yet sadness surrounds me

    and i don't know why

    when I've ran out of tears

    and i never cry

    still I'm weak and i always succumb

    finding solace in being

    so comfortably numb

    when i fight in a battle I've already lost

    the pain not even worth

    what its already cost

    so what do i have left?

    if i have nothing to give?

    there's loneliness in existing

    but i don't know how to live.

    1. ahorseback profile image46
      ahorsebackposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      It is said that insanity is making the same mistakes over and over,  I think I'll  stop making them  one day....

      1. alternate poet profile image78
        alternate poetposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        I think that the quote is "Stupidity is making the same mistakes over and over again - and expecting different results"

        Insanity is when everyone around you seems to be insane - unless you are in Wales when that would be normal.

  2. ediggity profile image59
    ediggityposted 7 years ago

    Snap snap....snap snap....groovy

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    Gracie Sophiaposted 7 years ago

    I can feel some of the raw emotion.

  4. alternate poet profile image78
    alternate poetposted 7 years ago

    Maybe the writing is a little too sane for the subject, it hangs together well smile

 
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