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Screw You And The Horse You Came In On !

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    hitalotposted 6 years ago

    Faith-
    In the hood... ( An acronym form means:
    First Achievement In The Hood'
    As the Dice Man said, " If you can't speak the language then get the f**k out of the country !

    Yet if your not acting very good ?

    It's about respect young Robin Hood'
    That young sista in the hood makes plans out of make believe !
    Living in borrowed suit cases and stolen keys'
    How you had fought so very hard and fierce'

    My one true love was gone from here ?

    That challenge to be set free is a question of time'
    My one solution is using my mind'
    Living on the edge and it's going to my head'
    Sitting up at night all alone in bed'

    Following the rainbow to the sky'
    I see a crystal clear vision of you pass me by'
    Our war were in is almost over ?
    It's so hard to believe I lost my lover ?

    Loving you is so untrue that's why I must say to you'
    Your too young to fall in love/
    If you don't stop you will just get shoved !

    1. watchya profile image60
      watchyaposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      If you don't stop you will just get shoved

      Love it ! lol

  2. blondepoet profile image80
    blondepoetposted 6 years ago

    Is that a song, your national anthem am confused?

    1. shazwellyn profile image83
      shazwellynposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      He needs to hub this and put it into hub makeover for critism if he wants people to read anc understand it smile

      1. blondepoet profile image80
        blondepoetposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Oh I could not agree more smile

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        hitalotposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you for your kind words of encouragement'
        Within this new year let us send forth a word of cheer !
        Although for some may be a bit perplexed ?
        From living in blatant darkness;
        Today a new light shines forth out of the bleak whisper of darkness,
        I will do what you said yet on my own terms and my own time'
        The challenge to be set free from criticism is only a question of time ?
        Unless you are a Poe'..., Ashberry or Grisham.

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        hitalotposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        anc ? is that a word ?

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    hitalotposted 6 years ago

    Friends,
    I love to be loved'
    Despite what the critics have rationalized'
    Poetry is what flows/
    "Screw you and the horse " Is important/
    In fact it's surreal with a much twisted aura of poetic perfection/
    Still what one does with their time today'
    Will be echoed throughout all of eternity !

  4. brianzen profile image60
    brianzenposted 6 years ago

    My horse and I say good day to you... (and we left some money on the nightstand)

  5. flread45 profile image81
    flread45posted 6 years ago

    My horse left you some nitrogen to keep going on.

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      hitalotposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Today I will take my horse into the desert with a no name'
      He will venture into the creative world of love'
      There my horse will be accepted as the true Stallion that he is'
      His legacy will shine forth for all the watching world to enjoy and embrace'
      Thank you for your kind words'
      (flread45)
      I will take heed and will not relent in my poetic endeavor's/

      Most Sincerely,

      Mario William Vitale

  6. Shadesbreath profile image89
    Shadesbreathposted 6 years ago

    The Robin Hood verse is very poetic.  The rest needs work to transform from abstraction to poetry still, but I think it's a great start.

 
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