Can anyone help me turn my poem into song?

  1. spk124 profile image60
    spk124posted 6 years ago

    I have written a ballad and I am just wondering if there is any hubber who can put melody into it.

    1. Ben Evans profile image74
      Ben Evansposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      I took a look at your poem and added a little meter to it.  Now,  there is no hard and true method to lyrics  When I wrote the lyrics, I change your meaning so this is just to kind of follow what you are saying and to give you a guide.

      Dark bath for the crystal
      the womb that gave birth.
      Blue essence of aqua
      you take away our worth.

      To all things that are living
      stained and helpless without
      they gain their living
      not by what you tout.

      Oil spill you are mess
      You come into our life
      and rob our nest

      Life is  quite  brash
      by all you have done
      you made a big mess
      yes you are the one.

      I hope this helps you start.  I am sorry about the contrived nature and you are welcome to use what I started so far.



      1. spk124 profile image60
        spk124posted 6 years ago in reply to this

        Thank you ben, and you did look into my hub to help me. Actually i wrote a ballad which I will post later.

        And by the way, you have done a good job in re-writing my piece. Again thanks.