If I were asked to write a poem
I rather write about a friend I've known.
The one who always there for me
Whom can I count on and lean on, tenderly.
A friend who I trust so much
Often cares for me and understand me a lot.
When problems comes into my life
Doesn't leave at my sight and always at my side.
A person who I believe unto
A friend who share solve with my shortcomings and problems, too.
Through thick and thin
We both care and share our dreams.
If God allows me to make a wish
I'll hope that we could live in peace.
But when hindrances keep our dreams apart
The kindness and the goodness we've sahred will never part.
One thing I could give
To a friend I still believe
Is the friendship thta bind us together
To God I pray, we'll still be forever and ever.
not as good as the last one in my opinion you should be putting these into hubs not on the forums really.
Where are you from?
Got here after posting something for my friend..Darling gone.
jeric macam, you have got it flowing and like alternate poet advised...get this piece into hubs plz...
If you love writing poetry, it doesn't matter so much what other people think, as much as it matters that you keep writing it by the pound. Practice will produce your singular voice, and your voice will become clear and strong, the more you write.
Your poem has nice elements to it. But your best work is yet to come, I believe.
Yes, hub this. And keep writing.
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