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Grounded Anyways - Aschool blues poem

  1. sofs profile image86
    sofsposted 6 years ago

    Grounded Anyways



    Every morning i'm thouroughly shaken,

    Screamed and yelled at,

    And rudely awakened.



    Pushed and prodded,

    i'm finally dressed,

    Tied and booted into the bus I'm thrust.



    On my back a heavy load,

    Staggering under the weight I plod,

    I just look nine decades old!!



    Into my class I finally walk,

    My teacher yells and ters me apart,

    Oh what a great start!!



    Wrong uniform..homework not done,

    she writes a note, with her red pen,

    My evening is ruined no more fun,

    I'm grounded again!!

    I know my mom!!!

  2. bsscorpio8 profile image60
    bsscorpio8posted 6 years ago

    Damn sofs, what should I say? Sounds like me; circa 1979, except I was one decade and three years old.

    1. sofs profile image86
      sofsposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Wow I finally found a person who actually read this and identified with himself   Thanx  bsscorpio

  3. Pratonix profile image71
    Pratonixposted 6 years ago

    Well done, sofs. You have to improve your spelling. But you have great poetic talent. Keep up the good work!

    1. sofs profile image86
      sofsposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Pratonix I should say thank you very much,  for I found another one to read this.  Just ripped it off without a spell check the day I joined HP was too excited. Now I am down to earth.
      Its been lying there  unseen,  unread, unloved and unsung  for three weeks and then I wonder how bsscorpio dug this out .
      Have an awesome day!

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    UNLOVED ROHITposted 6 years ago

    never been grounded though just got lots of spanks in my life......... but nice poems any ways

    1. sofs profile image86
      sofsposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you unloved Rohit, I just wrote it for my sons poetry recital in school,
      I haven't been grounded too, but have seen many !!
      Thanx for looking this up. I just wrote one more would appreciate your comments on it.
      Have a great day!

 
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