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FREE YOURSELF POETRY

  1. sesxymoma5 profile image59
    sesxymoma5posted 6 years ago

    WHY MUST WE MAKE LIFE SO HARD
    WHEN IT IS SO EASY
    WHY DO WE LIVE EACH DAY TRYING TO BE RICH
    WHAT IF MONEY FELL FROM THE SKY
    WOULD YOU QUESTION WHY
    WHAT IF WE WERE BORN RICH
    WOULD YOU WANT TO BE POOR
    WHAT IF EVERY THING WE ASK GOD FOR HE GAVE IT TO US
    WOULD THE WORLD BE A BETTER PLACE
    LIFE IS A BEUTIFUL THING RICH OR POOR
    ENJOY IT WHY YOU CAN
    BECAUSE ONE DAY IT WOULD BE NO MORE
    WHY,WHEN ,WHAT ,AND WOULD

  2. sesxymoma5 profile image59
    sesxymoma5posted 6 years ago

    TODAY LETS FREE OUR MINDS

  3. Joy56 profile image61
    Joy56posted 6 years ago

    i am liking your words, but someone very soon, will tell you off for writing in block capitals, saying you are shouting at us, then someone else will tell you to make a hub out of it.

       Me i just think you are right, want to make a statement in the forums make one, thumbs up

    1. sesxymoma5 profile image59
      sesxymoma5posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Thank you i am new to this so i dont know too much about hubbing..so thank s for the advice.just want people to start freeing their minds in writing poetry

  4. lady_love158 profile image61
    lady_love158posted 6 years ago

    I too, enjoyed your words!

    1. sesxymoma5 profile image59
      sesxymoma5posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      thank you

  5. Joy56 profile image61
    Joy56posted 6 years ago

    there are lots of us who love poetry, have you written any hubs with your poetry yet, i would love to read some,

    1. sesxymoma5 profile image59
      sesxymoma5posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      no not yet ...but i will start. i dont write on paper it just comes from the head

      1. saleheensblog profile image60
        saleheensblogposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        i personally like poetry,everyone got a poetic heart inside.Someone discovers and unfold it someone don't.

  6. Joy56 profile image61
    Joy56posted 6 years ago

    fom the head..... wow...... i cannot wait to see your hubs, go on write one, then let us know on this thread when it is done, thanks

    1. sesxymoma5 profile image59
      sesxymoma5posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Why go to war when there is love and peace
      Would you choose love and peace over war
      Or would u choose war over love and peace
      Why would you answer that when ist the same thing
      Love and Peace is what i want and need
      But war is what i want want NO MORE

  7. Jaggedfrost profile image88
    Jaggedfrostposted 6 years ago

    Could there be justice without a sword?
    and if the sword then blood must pay
    but let all be innocent
    heaven forbid
    for the sword couldn't ever be picked up that way

    Let there be peace but let its practitioners be pure
    dry up the world from all that it must now endure
    rid the world of vice and sin
    regardless of which set of morals or world you live in.
    do all that and one has a holy war
    because what is good for one is sacrilege for one or more.

    Add all to that a need to be free
    to choose and that won't happen
    if the right to do wrong we lose
    if that is the case then some will choose that path
    and lose their innocence and
    then justice must come and blood must fall

    Remember this cycle before the end
    it isn't worth the cost to force peace
    until all believe in the same way.
    but which way to choose and which end to seek?
    Perhaps you will find that the good and the meek
    are no wiser then you but then you might still take a peek
    and find that they are penning their hopes on
    a resurrected Jew.

  8. Joy56 profile image61
    Joy56posted 6 years ago

    very well done, i am enjoying this thread.

    1. Jaggedfrost profile image88
      Jaggedfrostposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Why thank you Joy, I think I am enjoying it too although when you write in verse and get in that mode, stopping seems almost impossible.

 
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