You are swimming around,in my swirling liquid head.First you splish then you splash,and then you turn my fire red. I just set my boat on fire,and lit my last flare.The moment that I saw you,I preyed my last prayer. I'm drifting in your inner beauty,you are my one last hope.Weave for me the length of your love,and from it braid me a rope. It doesn't matter you're in the distance,and off of my trajectory.I will swim with endless persistence,but only if you command me.
I love this poem!The third stanza is awesome!"Weave for me the length of your loveand from it braid me a rope"---at once romantic, poetic, and realistic; quite an accomplishment with words!By the way, do you mean "pray" instead of "prey"?
YES! I command you! Start swimming now!
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