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Do I add a comma after the Yet?

  1. kookoo88 profile image60
    kookoo88posted 6 years ago

    I don't know whether to add a comma or a semicolon or nothing after the "Yet"

    Liselle nodded.  “It all sounds so sensible when you say it like that.  Yet when I refused to make the promise, she made it sound as though I hated the world.”

    1. SomewayOuttaHere profile image59
      SomewayOuttaHereposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      ...you could use a comma....like a pause...or nothing...how do you want it read?  read it aloud and then decide.....not a semicolon.

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    DoorMattnomoreposted 6 years ago
    1. kookoo88 profile image60
      kookoo88posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Rule #2, got it. smile

      It would become:
      Liselle nodded.  “It all sounds so sensible when you say it like that, yet when I refused to make the promise she made it sound as though I hated the world.”

      Yes?

      *bookmarks link*  Thank you. smile

  3. kookoo88 profile image60
    kookoo88posted 6 years ago

    This is what I finally ended with.  It flows much better.  Thank you for the help. smile

    Liselle nodded.  “It all sounds so sensible when you say it like that, yet when I refused to promise she made it seem as though I hated the world.”

 
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