Bleeding Roses

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   Desired Devinelyposted 13 years ago

   losing what i desire most
   goin threw that stupid depreeing state
   i have tried not to cry
   and i have tried not to feel pain
   but when the rose died
   i took my last breath
   stupid people all around
   heart break here and everywhere
   i have consumed all that i can take
   a sharp pain down my arm
   cold wet driping on my hand
   puddles on the floor
   pain in my heart that is broken
   people singin sad songs
   i high pitch bell rings
   foot stepsgettin louder then softer
   roses laying on the casket dieing
   pitures bein placed where they belong
   the peacher is giving his speeech
   pronounsed words sre spoken
   and people are leaving the church
   and tears being shead
   the night are peacefull
   for that is the last night i lie awake

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      Jaggedfrostposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      To your credit, this one is a lot more legible then some of your others but the theme has returned to the more morose.

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   WryLiltposted 13 years ago

   Lovely poem. Just wondering if you realize you can put this into a hub? Click "Start a new hub" in green at the top of the page.

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