Hanging Off

  1. Desired Devinely profile image59
    Desired Devinelyposted 6 years ago

    Air unable to enhale
    air unable to breathe
    chockin in the atmostsphere
    from something that dont seem to b
    hangin on a rope
    tied tight to my throat
    im slowly drifting away
    to find a place to stay
    a peaceful rest
    with nothing kept
    full of broken memories
    that are slamed on the ground
    not even with a lastin sound

    1. Jaggedfrost profile image88
      Jaggedfrostposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      have you heard of the little boy who cried wolf?

  2. jimmythejock profile image82
    jimmythejockposted 6 years ago

    wouldn't you be better to post your poetry in a hub?