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dream gurl

  1. jesse verma profile image60
    jesse vermaposted 6 years ago

    http://s1.hubimg.com/u/4085772_f248.jpg
    ay thiz iz 4 my dream gurl
    Ya lips are so exquisite
    but I dont know what is it
    your lips your hair
    wat it is I dont care
    its got me hypnotized catch me starin glarin locked on your eyes
    i Can see the fire burnin in our lives and you can see right past the lies and you portray what I idolize
    dream gurl when i;m with ya time stops
    I feel like i'm on top
    but not like a prince but a king
    gurl you know that i'm gonna give you a diamond ring
    my heart is true is yours i'll even give you the key to the door

    I drink to ease the pain I smoke weed to keep from going insane.
    You don’t have to ask twice girl I’ll kiss you in the rain as I’m checkin you’re A-frame.
    I’ll tell ya girl you take away the pain, and you keep my spirit tame.
    You are like my sunrise it’s such a nice surprise to wake and see another day.
    See you and me the same but opposite, like you’re my other half.
    Fillin my heart with mass see you and me we got this perfect chemistry.
    And I know this is the way it should be.
    When you kiss me you make my body shiver with anticipation.
    Of a relationship that could be possibly lead to me fertilizing you with the seed.
    That could be the next Muhamed Ali.
    But seriously you mean the world to me and I love you boo I don’t ever want to hear the words we threw.

    Foever you will remain my dream gurl
    My feelings for you are like a never ending river.
    When you ask me if I think we’re gonna last forever n ever.
    I tell u for me its endeavourer.
    As long as my heart beats and we are together I know I am complete.
    Cuz my feelings for you guarantee that I am going to remain true.
    From the bottom of my heart to the depths of my soul I know I love you.
    cuz you suspend and un bend and became part of my heart.
    And made it into abstract art.
    My only hope it that you don’t tear it apart.
    I know that as long as our hearts are combined together.
    I know that we are going to last forever and ever dream gurl.

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      Justsilvieposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      awww i really like thiz poem too.

    2. saleheensblog profile image61
      saleheensblogposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      you should make a hub with it

      1. Jaggedfrost profile image83
        Jaggedfrostposted 6 years ago in reply to this

        OP you will at least get a wider audience that way.  via etiquette we generally don't look for or read poems done here.  This is for discussion topics.

    3. MalAdjusted profile image55
      MalAdjustedposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      This is amazing.

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    Home Girlposted 6 years ago

    11 drops of valerianum in a warm camomile tea before going to bed might help greatly... big_smile

  3. Awakened Light profile image58
    Awakened Lightposted 6 years ago

    Nice write Jesse. I like the way it flowed.

    1. jesse verma profile image60
      jesse vermaposted 3 years ago in reply to this

      Hella thanks

  4. Awakened Light profile image58
    Awakened Lightposted 6 years ago

    Nice write Jesse. I like the way it flowed.

  5. kasiapl profile image53
    kasiaplposted 6 years ago

    Nice smile

  6. reallygoodpoetry profile image51
    reallygoodpoetryposted 6 years ago

    nice pome smile

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    Beth37posted 3 years ago

    Im trying to figure out how the pic you included has to do with your dream gurl. Is that her or....?

    1. jesse verma profile image60
      jesse vermaposted 3 years ago in reply to this

      Dats me In the blue tall tee

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        Beth37posted 3 years ago in reply to this

        So... why do you have a pic. of yourself at the top of a love letter to a gurl? It's seems a bit confusing.

  8. EncephaloiDead profile image60
    EncephaloiDeadposted 3 years ago

    Looks like the 'dream gurl' referred to in the poem is anyone who is physically attractive under the influence of alcohol and pot.

    1. jesse verma profile image60
      jesse vermaposted 3 years ago in reply to this

      I'm still Schering there was this one girl that was the world to me but her drugs  where more inportin then our kid..

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    Beth37posted 3 years ago

    I guess we'll never know.

 
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