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What do u think is the story behind this poem ? Please lemme know guys

  1. Cracknutcase profile image75
    Cracknutcaseposted 6 years ago

    Memories

    Birds are chirping loudly
    And Day is giving way to the night.
    I can feel only silence inside me,
    Making me realize nothing is Alright.

    There is a feeling of emptiness left
    And whole lots of memories to regret.
    I feel so battered at this very moment
    Like my heart is burning in a fire torment.

    The rushing wind touched my face
    And the tears stormed out of my eyes.
    Ur absence suddenly struck my heart
    And my whole world fell apart.

    I don't know what happened,
    Why u left me with so many questions?
    All i know is I loved you
    And now am left with no clue.

    Please don't leave me baby
    I'm sure we can work it out.
    Please don't turn deaf to my plea's
    I don't have the strength to shout.

    Just tell me u love me
    And I'll be here forever.
    Just tell me u need me
    I'll leave you never!!

    1. Julie2 profile image60
      Julie2posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      loss of a loved one

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    Vincent Mooreposted 6 years ago

    I think it's about a broken heart that wants her man to come back to her and never leave her side, she is waiting for him with open arms. I sure hope he comes back to you.

    1. Cracknutcase profile image75
      Cracknutcaseposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      U r absolutely right Vincent... It is about a girl who is unable to accept the fact that the man she loved has left her broken hearted and she is unable to let go n move on...
      Thanks for stopping by and replying smile

  3. Ashantina profile image60
    Ashantinaposted 6 years ago

    Unfinished business from your end and feelings of rejection.
    The realisation of love unrequited.
    The pain you feel of love lost.

    1. Julie2 profile image60
      Julie2posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Ashantina, I like that! You said it better then I did.

    2. Cracknutcase profile image75
      Cracknutcaseposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Right Ashantina... The agony a girl feels when she realises tht the man who meant everything to her was just playing a game with her..
      Thanks for replying smile

 
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